[Report This]Date: January 04 2021 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: A Cat's Tail
Great Story. I loved how they began to enjoy the transformation as it went on to the point that Amber would not change them back. I wonder what will happen since the nanobots are offfline if you continue the story. Will the little catgirls get bigger or the parents? There are a lot of possibilities. I hope there is more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I plan to continue the story but do not have schedule for when. There are more things that will happen with the catkittens and the parents. I can promise that there will be bigger catgirls.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2021 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: A Cat's Tail
Alright, this was awesome. Definitely a unique story (in the best way), and I found myself enjoying Amber and Maria's changes far more than I thought I would.
A few things I'm curious about if you were to continue, which you definitely should!
Now that the nanobots are disconnected from Alex's control, they've reverted to an autonomous mode, right? Will they make changes themselves? Maybe even fall under the subconcious or conscious control of the girls?
And what about Maria's children? Have they inherited their own nanobots? Or will they just naturally grow into catgirls of that caliber on their own?
I'd love to see what happens as the catgirls unleash themselves upon the world, and maybe, hopefully, get even bigger!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I plan to continue but it might be a little while before another chapter. for some of your questions, I will try to answer some the best I can and leave some blank for imagination. the nanobots run on an autonomous mode when they are disconnected. I like you questions about their autonomous mode and what they do in that state but I am going to leave it blank on that subject for what I have planned. For Maria's children, they did not inherit their own nanobots but we will see them grow. The catgirls will definitly get bigger.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2021 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: A Cat's Tail
The third chapter was interesting and opened many possibilities for a continuation that I can only guess what you have in mind. Especially regarding the kittens; their presence makes me wonder if there's going to be a montage or time skip for when they're somewhat older and how Alex deals with the widening size difference between him and his cat-hybrid pseudo-family. You had a nice blend of maintaining the erotic nature of the story while explaining things typical of a fantasy or science fiction story where we're learning about the habits and biology of fantastical creatures.
Hopefully the 'Furry' tag on the story doesn't deter any potential readers that would've been interested in reading and reviewing this. Rarely does a writer tread these sorts of waters, and sometimes for a unique story, it takes a while before its potential target audience finally discovers it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I do hope the 'furry' tag does not discourage readers. I think this is some of my greatest writings yet. I can not go into much detail about the story's future but there will be a larger size gap between Alex and has cat-hybrid pseudo-family.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2021 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Cat's Tail
Amazong chapter. Loved the fact that the sister found the phone and forced the impregnation of subjects as well as speeding up of her friends pregnancy. Would have liked if she sped hers up as well before breaking the phone. Also love the way the phone signal and nanobots are tied together making changes permanent with the phones destruction. Curious if the offspring will have the nanites in them and if so would the female offspring have the same pre-programmed feelings towards the brother? Hope you add more, but if not, it was a great story as it sits. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I enjoy going through reviews and reading what people said. I plan to continue the story because of readers reviews. I am busy with stuff and other things so updates might be slow.