Date: February 11 2021 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 5: Some Cats-ing up to do
I like the idea there's going to be a sexual dimorphism between the converted men and women. Having the men shrink into mouseboys would allow for a great size difference without requiring that the catgirls grow too colossally big to function as a society on planet Earth. Curious if it's going to be a multi-size tier society where there's various mouseboys and catgirls winding up at different static heights, or if it's going to be progressive, where all mouseboys progressively grow smaller while the catgirls grow bigger through some means. The latter feels more appealing to me, especially if there's a trigger; mouseboy gets caught by horny catgirl, and winds up smaller after the lovey-dovey kitten making process, thus making Alex's journey to fix things ever more difficult the more he fails and becomes closer to a real mouse in size.
In any case, since you already worked out what's going to happen in the future, I'll be looking forward to what you actually have planned for this story
Author's Response:
thank you for the review. I am aiming for the sort of world were human, catgirls and mouseboys are trying to figure out how to live together with one normal size, another small and exploitable, and the last one is big and horny. I look over the reviews and look over ideas and suggestions that people review and see if I can put it into the story, I am tweaking the story a little bit already because of some reviews and like the ideas. I am looking over your ideas and seeing if I can add it to the story. I have the ending planned out but that doesn't mean I can't change it, tweak it, or create alternate endings. I do say though that as Alex tries to fix things, he will be more of a mouse in comparision.