Date: June 13 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7: Alternate ending
Honestly, I don't see how you can top this ending. You can build off of this ending far more easily if you ever return and write more chapters than the bad ending route, it's also wholesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am glad that this ending was good. I am working on the true ending and tweeking some things based on reviewers reviews. I don't know about returning to this story once it is done. I want to complete some stories so I can work on other stories.
Date: June 12 2021 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 7: Alternate ending
Pretty good chapter. Been waiting it for a while, but after reading it, it was worth it.
Looking foward to the real ending, and while I know it is suppossed to be the "bad end", like Petite Soeur said in his comment, hopping for a more wholesome, or at least a gentle ending, and not going for the classic ending where they stoped seeing the mouse as nothing more than pests to be killed. He being loved and played (either as lover, a pet or a toy) by his huge cat mistresses, maybe even acepting his new role as a mouse boy.
Also hopping for more gigantic cat girls, we barely had anything with his huge mom, hope the rest grow as big, or even bigger.
Well, whatever you choose to do, I know it will be great.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am listening to these reviews and seeing that people want more of a happy ending to the true ending. I am changing the story's ending to not be so much the "bad end" but more of "Amber wins." I am using this feedback to view this ending as "Alex wins." where Alex creates the catgirl society to be as human as possible while Amber's world has the catgirls be more like cats, they are in charge of everything. The true ending will still have some "bad ending" feels but I am trying to create a more wholesome ending. You will have to wait and see how the relationship between Alex and Amber will become.
For the huge mom, I will try to get her involved but I cannot make any promises. The catgirls will definitely be getting bigger than their previous sizes.
Date: June 12 2021 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7: Alternate ending
Yay! I'm glad you've returned to this series and are working on the actual ending. Alex 'marrying' the family cat Mabel in this wholesome alternate ending is something I didn't expect. Hopefully the real ending is as 'wholesome' as this one, even if it may be considered a bad ending; I want the colossal catgirls and micro-mouseboys to also live happily ever after.
While I understand the need to maintain suspension of disbelief, hopefully the true ending satisfies the other reviewers and my hopes and dreams for even bigger catgirls in the continuation. Though, I'm not sure how big of a size difference the other reviewers were hoping for or how big you can manage to write within the limitations of your own imagination in regards to the catgirl's biology in relation to the new world society. Since they're based on cats, they'll surely have better eyesight and hearing than a regular human, and their cat-like dexterity and sensitivity would allow them to interact and play with significantly smaller objects and creatures.
There isn't much size-fetish fiction with catgirls over the last two decades, so congratulations on contributing to the handful of existing stories. Kari by Kamaria was one of the first English stories I read when I discovered size-fetish fiction on the internet over a decade and a half ago (it also has the best growth sequence I've read until now). Kamaria decided to go with a catgirl from a different planet who shrinks down to visit Earth before growing back to her true height of 52 miles tall, though the single reviewer back then said 52 miles is TOO DAMN BIG, which might be a sentiment that persists even to this day among western reviewers. In comparison, the OG webhost for the Japanese community, Yunzo, has an original character, Eliza, that is often depicted as being tera sized and gentle, and I don't believe I've ever seen any reviews or comments in the Japanese community complaining about such vast sizes and how it's impossible to interact or whatnot, since the ability to interact is entirely left to the whims of the author and what they want to do with the character in their story.
In any case, thank you for returning to this story. Looking forward to what you have planned for Alex and his titanic titty kitty daughters in the midst of their growth and heat period. When I read this alternate chapter, I kept imagining what things would be like in the alternate reality where the emergency signal failed (i.e. Alex still marrying catgirl Mabel and having cute and affectionate kitten-daughters).
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and the constant reading. I am glad that I was able to expaned a limited explored area. I hope that it inspires more people to write or look into it. I didn't see much in this area so I decided to test the waters in this subject and it turned out pretty good. I will have to read Kari and see about that story. I do have to say that 52 miles is massive, nearly eight times the height of Mt. Everest, but in some cases that is fine. it is all how you get there and what everyone can do.
As I am working on the true ending of the story, the catgirls will become bigger than before as Amber has more control of what catgirls actually become. I cannot promise colossal size catgirls but they will definitely have a larger presence. The catgirls have better eyesight and hearing than humans, I don't know how it will play in the true ending but I know that cat-like dexterity and sensitivity will play a part in playing with little objects.
In this final chapter, Alex will interact with his kitten daughters again, this time with bigger growths and heat periods. For Mabel, I will try to get a cameo or the sort of her catgirl form in the chapter but I cannot promise if it will be big or not.
I am currently rethinking and writing the true ending as I am getting more reviews of what people want. I know what I am aiming for but I can change some stuff how it is supposed to get to that point.