[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 8:31 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
Another awesome update. I realize we're coming to the end of it though. Are you planning on doing a full-blown sequel you alluded to in the intro to this story? I was a huge fan of the first one and this one's great too of course.
Author's Response:
Yes I plan to write a sequel, but I am almost certain it's going to take a long while. I want to make sure it's good, and that takes time. Thanks for the support!
[Report This]Date: January 15 2021 3:45 AM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
This is some Grade-A USDA prime smut right here.
Author's Response:
Ay lmao thanks man
Date: January 14 2021 4:25 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
I lovr your stories and can't wait for more. Welcome back and my only critique is I wish your gave us more information on the pov of being inside the panties or pussy. Keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I must say I'm not the best at describing such pov, but I promise to try my best
[Report This]Date: January 11 2021 8:50 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
Welcome back Bob!
Glad to see another story from you.
Also, I think it's funny how you lowered my expectations with the chapter intro and suddenly this chapter gets immediately interesting with the inclusion of Sarah. I assume this is the same Sarah from the Matt Dexter story, right?
You mention all these things about this story such as plot, characters and worldbuilding, but nothing about sex. So I thought there wasn't going to be anything intimate. Well, after reading this first chapter, I'm glad I was wrong. Haha.
What a great start and I miss this Chesnut school. And I also miss Sarah.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, this is the same Sarah, which will probably become more obvious in the future chapters. One of the things I tried in this story was to go immediately into the graphic scenes, and while that did not pan out in the long run, it made for a hell of a short story.