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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2021 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Got to say I'm really enjoying this story. Seeing a guy like Elliott being pursued by a giantess way out of his league. 

Reviewer: No_one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5: Developing Tension

Hello No_one here, happy to see you're still around, Minnie is still a bitch I see, and Elliot still hasn't destroyed her for some reason, and I'm very very very interested in Munalune's political party. Look forward to the next update at some point with excitement

10/10

Minnie is still a bitch

Reviewer: elk2542 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 27 2021 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try

I'm late to the party, but just wanted to say I like where this story was going and hope you continue it some day. I read some of your other MAJOR/minor stories too and will share some thoughts below:

It seems you already had an old MAJOR woman/minor young man couple in your prequel story with Summer Ray and Randalf. Wonder if they would make a cameo appearence in this like Mabel did (who was also in your older stories), since they are probably a few steps ahead of where Hilda and Elliot appear to be heading by now. Summer at least, seems like someone Hilda would know from her business dealings.

Mille not being into minors is pretty unique, since the other stories made it seem like minors were coveted by MAJORS as romantic partners, or at the very least, sex objects, based on how they acted around Izzy for instance. On the other hand, it is ood from that sense that Elliot remained a virgin (up to a point) since he's attending a college full of young, stunning looking, hormone addled MAJORS. It must be like being at the Olympic Village.

I wonder what Munalune is planning to do with Elliot. She's already spoiled and well off through family association, and appears to have MAJORS at her beck and call, so it doesn't seem like she has much to gain from attempting to blackmail him.

The Hilda/Elliot relationship stuff is great. I got the impression of Hilda being this composed, collected, in control, matracich and busineeswoman, so it pretty funny to read about her tripping over herself to be with someone like Elliot. The sex must have been that good. Aside from the very sudden and wlid way Eliot had his first sexual experience, Elloit still seems reluctant to fully embrace her advances becuase his brain is prob still trying to process that this is actually happening. In the span of a few days, he went from being an awkward virgin that people paid no mind, to having a towering, wealthy, superhuman MAJOR gilf sex goddess eagerly chasing after him. He probably thought she would just move on to the next conquest and write off the encounter, not expecting her to go out of her way to court him. 

Anyway sorry if that was long, if you are still reading this. It's an interesting start so far. 

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2021 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try

She fucking pulled a kabedon on Elliot and the fact that it didn’t have its desired effect is fucking hilarious. Everything about that encounter was just hilarious, from Hilda fumbling over her own feet in trying to woo a minor to her not expecting Riley to follow up with a punch, you know what I just love seeing MAJORS getting taken down a peg or three and doubly so if it’s a minor doing it.


I don’t know how but I Kinda feel a bit bad for Minnesota, she still a bitch tho


Was hoping for a bit more dialog between Elliot and Hilda before they fucked again but I guess things move fast with MAJORS.
I'm liking this going from the perspective of one character to another, it most definitely shed some light on how they tick.


Overall this was a great fucking chapter, good fucking job

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try

You're welcome, thanks for writing 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try

Truly enjoying the evolution of these characters. Elliot's timidness and Hilda's regret, all at odds with their base instincts. Thanks for taking the time to share this stellar work with all of us - for free! 'Til next time.

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: Last Chance Encounter

Such a long and Beautiful fucking chapter and your giving it away for free, I love you 

p.s fuck Minnesota



Author's Response:

Not a long comment but beautiful none the less. Thank you!

-Notsirk

Fuck you too!

-Minnesota. 

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: Last Chance Encounter

Enjoying all the character interactions even Minne more than Riley wonder if she might grow to like Elliot. Hoping to see more Mabel since shes really supportive of Elliot which is rare for a Major.

Am liking Hilda more knowing her background and gotta love big milfs.

Thanks for the updates.

 



Author's Response:

Well thanks! No idea if Minnie will warm up to Elliot but things ain't looking good so far. I would hope Mabel is supportive of Elliot, that's kind of her job and not only that but she's has a pretty close friend who is a minor so that probably effects things. I wonder who that friend is? Thanks for the comment. 

Big milfs. Gotta love em! 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Thanks for getting bit by the writing bug. This is a wonderful story, definitely hooked, perhaps even moreso than your earlier ones. I dunno, something about this one just flows really well. And the scenario of him being caught in her bed, the unaware/accidental non-con, brilliant stuff. No pressure, take your time, but please do stay bit haha ;)

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Please continue! This is easily one of my favorite new stories. Especially the cliffhanger it left on with Hilda.



Author's Response:

Well I just added another chapter so I guess I continued it! 

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2021 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Nice to see you writing again NotSirk. Great to see a Minor knowing she can have power over Majors which is probably a secret held my the oldest of Majors. Thinking things wont go to well for Hilda since she had her way with a Minor but she doesnt seem like a bad person so hoping things get resolved even more intimate between her and Elliot.

Elliot needs to keep Ridley at arms lenght since shes not a good friend from what we have seen maybe have her realize Elliots needs and not be selfish.

Hope to see more soon, keep up the great work.

 



Author's Response:

Hrrmmm. I wonder what you think of the most recent chapter now? Hrmm. 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

I always forget to add a rating, it slips my mind every time.



Author's Response:

Ratings don't matter bro! Don't rate, give me a 1 star. Who cares! I just appreciate that you are reading! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Sirk Please,

I beg you to write more, it's an incredible pleasure to read your work as always. From your lovely story Tales, to your Major/minor writings, and even your especially brutal but delightful futa work with Rembrandt. I really enjoy your stories, they always have such wonderful characters and great dynamics between them. The interactions feel geniune, the world building feels fleshed out, and many times I feel myself swooning at the romantic intrigue and dynamics you bring to your characters.

I'm estatic to read this chapter, it was both an intro and a conclusion I didn't see coming. I'll reread your works for years to come because of how gooey they make me feel.



Author's Response:

No need to beg. I'm not that big a deal or that competent a writer to be worthy of begging! I'm writing again. I hope you enjoy this story as much as you appear to have enjoyed my others! 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Great to see you back and writing again. This is a fantastic story you've cooked up. Eager to see more of Hilda, Elliot, and Riley.



Author's Response:

Glad to see you back and commenting again? Uhhh...Thanks for real! Well this story is about Elliot and Hilda and to a lesser extent Riley so I too hope to see more of them! 

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2021 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Hey sandman579 ! I can only speak from my pov, but Howard's take was totally based on how I understood NotSirk main's story ! But also, NotSirk's stories are the main canon, whatever isn't picked up there doesn't happen as far as I'm concerned ^^



Author's Response:

Don't sell yourself short Kuro! Your stories are great contributions to the MAJOR/minor universe! Stuff I couldn't even think of. 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2021 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

I was actually just yesterday re-reading your Major/minor work and part of Rembrandt, lamenting at how you didn't have any other work related to the Major/minor series. I also wish Kurogane had expanded on his lore about minor hive-minds that you kinda went into in the minor classroom; about how more minors working together give the bond a more physical feeling. I hope this story explores that concept more or we see more strong minors dominating the bond. 

I had been lamenting that we never saw an Izzy x Linda spinoff or one-shot. It was pretty hot imo and I was sad that it never occurred in Izzy's main tale.



Author's Response:

Izzy x Linda! That would be a fun story maybe for an slightly alternate univers spin off. Fun! Sorry for your lament though. Hopefully you'll enjoy this story. 

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2021 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Fuck me this was good, exploring the capabilities of the bond, a dominant minor and a fucking cliffhanger, fuck you this is good.



Author's Response:

Fuck me this comment was good! Fuck you this comment was GOOD! 

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2021 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

Well gosh I hope she doesn't wake up the morning after to find a minor with broken bones and angrily hold him at fault for disturbing her and getting himself hurt. Does this story hint at the telepathic powers minors have that the old Major supremacist Howard Waid talked about in the Major/minor story of Alejandro and Shannon? Why the Majors once tried to actually exterminate the minors?



Author's Response:

I think it's pretty clear by now that's not how things went but that's a pretty interesting angle to appoach it from! I should consider that in the future. Also lore wise I just apporach it as anything you want to be canon is but don't hold it against me if it never comes up. 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Night Stand.

I care! This was the exact moment I was waiting for!

This dominant minor girl seems interesting. I wonder what will happen.

Thank you for writing and hopefully until next time!



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for caring and commenting! I'm glad to finally reward your patience! 

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