Date: April 23 2021 9:00 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
1) Don't think we're losing patience! We like a story that's more than cheap porn; proper character development in a full beginning makes the middle and end of the story that much more satisfying.
2) "If karma strikes, it'll be interesting to see a now giant Tina interact with a lil Miss Eva."
"The story of a domineering business woman and her meek assistant in a series of events that will forever change them both."
It just hit me that Asterisk only said that their lives will change, and didn't say how...
3) I bet that Eva assumes that Tina is meek and submissive because Tina engineers things when Eva isn't looking, and that's there's a world of schemes we don't know about because Eva's the POV character.
Date: April 22 2021 10:08 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
Turnabout karma with timid Tina would've been impressive enough. But now we know Tina's a swole mini-amazon. If karma strikes, it'll be interesting to see a now giant Tina interact with a lil Miss Eva. A mixture ofmeasured punishment at first with some "learn yoour lessons, clean up your act" I'd imagine. I can see Tina breaking Eva down before building her back up.
Author's Response:
No commento, but I will say I'm happy to see you speculating! Been looking forward to how folks would react to that Tina reveal.
Date: April 16 2021 3:25 PM Title: A Plan Gone Awry
Funny, I thought "signed agreement" meant "signed by the other party" so that now Eva could sign it as well... a part of me is still rooting against reason that Tina is somehow innocent, anyway good job.
Author's Response:
If often does to be fair haha. Eva just made a logical assumption.
Date: April 16 2021 8:50 AM Title: Hell Hath no Fury
"Sadly, Eva couldn’t simply fire her outright. That was a step too far and would draw attention she didn’t need."
Nice little complication there. We all know what's going to happen eventually, but now there's a lot more suspense. Eva can't simply make Tina disappear; she has to do engineer something that'll make it work.
Author's Response:
It's tough when you can't have it all your way.
Date: April 09 2021 2:50 PM Title: A Plan Gone Awry
Now her revenge plot against Tina has been set up. Now I'm wondering who else Eva will shrink for revenge or fun.
Author's Response:
Who knows? It shall remain a mystery.
Date: April 09 2021 12:13 AM Title: Time for Change
You're back again! Please don't havw her kill Tina, I'd love to see the character interactions they'd have.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2021 11:43 PM Title: A Plan Gone Awry
You had my curiousity... now you have my attention!
Great work, really looking forward to reading where this goes.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you're enjoying it so far!
Date: April 03 2021 8:44 AM Title: A Night In
Prediction: Eva's about to get screwed.
Author's Response:
I ain't sayin nuffin.
Date: March 26 2021 2:41 PM Title: Lunch Date
At this point, I feel like I know exactly what kind of people they are.
Author's Response:
Eyy, glad to hear it. I worry a lot about characterization stuff like that, so it's good to hear when it works out.
Date: March 23 2021 7:41 PM Title: Time for Change
I'm intrigued. It has all the giantess executive tropes I like, it sounds like it'll be a really good story, and the fact that it's mostly written already means that it's not going to be abandoned halfway through. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Happy to hear that.
It's actually all written believe it or not. There are a few chapter ideas I may add onto it, but it's basically done. Just about...I'd say 60% edited at the moment.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2021 5:28 PM Title: Time for Change
A borderline psychopath that treats workers like crap and has a massive superiority complex?
She's right, she'll be a great CEO
Date: March 20 2021 4:26 PM Title: Time for Change
I like where this is going
[Report This]Date: March 20 2021 12:54 AM Title: Time for Change
Looking forward to more.