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Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2021 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 9: A New Era

Wow, can't believe Valerie died...Also I hope Lorek decides not to be acting king per se, I liked that about him, it takes a big person to resist the allure of that kind of power.

 

This is sad, I liked all the Vandan family, now it won't be the same anymore...fuck...



Author's Response:

Hi, Malaka here. I'm really sorry that Valerie's death was not to your liking. I came up with the idea of her giving her life to save humans as a way for her to show her great commitment to protecting the innocent and helpless. This has always been my plan for her character, and this story portrayed it well. Her death and self-sacrifice, though tragic, will inspire the next generation, her children, to continue her legacy. I realize that most of my stories have happy endings, so maybe that's what people have come to expect, but occasionally I think a sad ending can be good as well, giving more meaning to a story and its characters and making you feel more strongly attached to them. That's just my opinion, though, you're free to disagree.

Lorek has no interest in ruling or being king, don't worry. He's perfectly happy to leave that to Belena, his only desire is to be with her and support her, since he loves her that much.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2021 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 9: A New Era

Wow, can't believe Valerie died...Also I hope Lorek decides not to be acting king per se, I liked that about him, it takes a big person to resist the allure of that kind of power.

 

This is sad, I liked all the Vandan family, now it won't be the same anymore...fuck...

Reviewer: aamiller1990 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 9: A New Era

You made me tear up. The Vandan series are some of my favorite stories of all time. Valerie's death shocked me. I figured either Valerie or Alban would die eventually in the series, but it's still a hard blow. A gripping story, and characters you care for very deeply. It hits you to the core.



Author's Response:

As a fan is this series too, I really feel you. Writing this was possibly harder than reading it, because Malaka told me the outline beforehand, so it was a lot to process. I'm glad this story moves you and I hope it was a fitting end for a beloved character!

 

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2021 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 9: A New Era

Thank you for completing this story for me, it really means a lot and I'm happy how it turned out. I look forward to seeing you continue this series, after your own story is finished, of course.



Author's Response:

It meant a lot to write this, so the thanks is to you for making an incredible universe that new stories can be added to.

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