[Report This]Date: May 13 2009 3:04 PM Title: My little mistake
I know that Jen's discovery, by other big people, was only a matter of time. But, part of me can't help feeling that this incident _is_ Sarah's fault. I mean, curiosity killed the cat, right?
Well, at the risk of sounding like a male sexist pig: I can't imagine anything cattier than a curious female!
*Let the verbal brickbats commence*
Date: May 13 2009 12:54 PM Title: My little mistake
I'm lovin' the melodrama on display in this chapter. It fits Bobby's character so well, and Jen's reaction to being discovered is intensely believable and perhaps a bit inciteful. You also did a masterful job with Sara's progression through the scene.
The dream sequence was pretty cool, too. I like how Bobby's confused emotions haunt him even in his sleep.
Bobby is so smooth, by the way...
"So...what's her name?"
"I don't know."
Priceless.