Date: June 07 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beach Time
I'd like to read more about people living under glass like in Brobby holidays... That idea was too good! Maybe the asian brobby could invite some students or scientists to study the micros. Hope to read again about it.
Date: June 07 2021 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beach Time
Mainly how you portray the Omnis. How you describe the little details about everything, for instance from another story you had a sneeze from the cinnamon story wipe out a section of the us. Also how you encorporate everything from feet to vore to reality breaking stuff in your stories so easily.
I appreciate you indulging my question; I hope it wasn't a bother! I am sometimes curious on what people may like about my stories, so this is good information to know. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts, and I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
Date: June 06 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beach Time
Just finished the first chapter. God I love your writing Viv!!!
Thank you! I'm curious as to what you like about my writing overall, assuming you didn't tell me once before and I forgot haha.
In any case, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!