Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2021 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story was going so well and was just absolutely ruined. There was a great connection between M and Nat and just entirely thrown away. Haven't been this dissapointed with a story on here for awhile. Normally, the stories with bad endings will start off poorly and I'll know I won't want to read them. But this just threw out all the development of the previous chapters.  You've written much good stories before, I don't know what happened here.