[Report This]Date: September 05 2021 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Ready for Delivery
Still loving the story. I think it'd be fun to see a girl who has no idea about the possibility of shrinking get a tiny as a gift.
I also think it might be interesting to see a tiny end up getting received by chance by a friend or acquaintance. Like maybe a girl orders a tiny, realizes it's someone she knows and feels a little bad about what she has planned, but decides that she paid so much for them and can't afford another, so they're just going to have to do. To fit in with the theme of other countries, could be that it was a guy shrunk in the US who gets shipped overseas and ends up being received by a girl he was friends with when she went to college in America or something.
Anyway, these are just random things I thought of, you do whatever you want, it's going great so far so whatever you do will be good I'm sure.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Ready for Delivery
Loved the French girl chapter too! Ideas for the future:
1. A shrunken person turned into jewelry. Maybe they're pretty small and part of a piercing, maybe they're a little bigger and wrapped around a toe as a toe ring.
2. Maybe tiny gets received by a girl who does speak English, but she bought him for a friend who very much doesn't speak English, and lies to her about what he is saying to make her torment him.
3. Maybe an Italian girl gets a tiny on a beach and makes him do some work for her. Could have him run sunscreen across her body, then complain about too much sand in her bikini bottoms and send him inside to crawl around and collect the sand. That second part I'm less sure about but I'd definitely like to see a girl with a tiny on a beach day who at some point stashes them in her bikini.
4. A hiker who orders two tinies, and the POV tiny realizes what she has in mind for them after seeing their companion stuffed into one of her hiking boots. She goes for some sort of mountainous hike with them as insoles.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Ready for Delivery
Phenomenal story, loved both country chapters so far. Excited to see the butt tag come into play.
Author's Response:
Ask and you shall recieve. I apprieciate any feed back and love when you guys tell me what you want next so please, tell me what yall want to see done to our tiny products.