[Report This]Date: October 07 2021 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wait a minute. I thought this story was finished after chapter 1? And now there's 2 chapters, but with another cliffhanger/ending. I can't tell. Lol.
Anyway, another amazing chapter. Not as good as the first one, but it's still great. That first chapter was simply a masterpiece. It hit all the points for me to have me enjoy it. This one, felt very similar and it was great to see Maria still horny after having her way with Erik.
Now she went after Jake and just like with Erik, I loved how she manipulated him to her advantage. It almost felt too easy for her, haha.
Also, that yoga scene was amazing. It was actually my favorite part of this chapter. Just some excercise gone sexual. Gotta love it.
So, will there be another chapter? I mean, I just love seeing Maria find and snatch prey. It's so fun to watch.
Anyway, another great chapter and I can't wait for what's next!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom~
And yeah it was much easier for Maria this time around as she both had some practice with Erik, and Jake was her son so used to being under her thumb (and bust) so was easy to control.
The commissioner, nosuspicious (https://aryion.com/g4/user/nosuspicious), came up with the yoga scene idea originally. It's so good, and feels such a natural way to progress from playful touches to sensual acts.
Originally these two chapters were planned as one story, but as Erik's part grew so long we ended up releasing them separately. After how well this went, nosuspicious has commissioned a sequel involving Maria, her sister Madeleine, and the whole boy's baseball team. With so many boys to split between them, those predatory women are going to be packing them into every orifice they can~ It'll likely be quite a while before the sequel drops though as I have a fairly lenthy commission queue.
Thanks again for the feedback and I hope you'll continue to enjoy my stories <3