Date: September 17 2021 7:17 AM Title: The Incident
Really great stuff so far, man!
Solid concept with some very good potential and written quality behind it, so looking forward to seeing where things go.
Also, the establishment of Casey and her boots is already a thing of beauty!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I've been trying to improve my writing, so I'm glad you think there's quality to it.
There's going to be a lot more of Casey and her boots in the future so I hope you enjoy.
Date: September 13 2021 4:10 PM Title: The Incident
Really enjoying this.
Author's Response:
Thanks man, your stories are a big inspiration for this one.
Date: September 13 2021 3:55 PM Title: The Incident
Not sure if ruining her life is a great idea, but sure you had a damn good idea and you're executing it well! Keep going!
Author's Response:
You'll see how the plan reveals itself haha, hopefully it all works out for him.
Date: September 13 2021 3:00 PM Title: The Incident
Wow, this is such a perfect world you created. Hope you keep it going for a while!
Author's Response:
Planning on it, glad you enjoyed.
Date: September 13 2021 2:43 PM Title: The Incident
Nice concept with high Potential. Take your time and move on. Nice Story
Author's Response:
Thank you!