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Reviewer: Canaan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2009 6:46 AM Title: Day 7

Oh my god.  Incredible story!

 

Here's to hoping that we see lots more from you down the road!



Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2009 3:24 PM Title: Day 7

This was a truly fascinating story. I wanted to read the whole thing and comment right away but unfortuantely time didnt allow for that.

This story was truly a treat to read, you did masterful job on the characters, each one felt fully fleshed out and real. They had there own lives, histories, thoughts and independances. 

The writing quality is top notch from start to finish, solid discriptions. I really enjoyed how you never really focused on one aspect. It was just a general flow. You didnt spend 3 pages on a foot scene and then quickly raced to the next. Each and every part had equal billing and flowed into one.

I give this story a 10 out of 10 and look forward to your next work.



Author's Response: Oh wow, that's a lot for the great review. There will be more to come, thanks. :)

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