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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2021 3:25 AM Title: Blair Brimstone's Haunted House

Do we really need to include "capybara" in our Halloween stories?  How odd.

For a short story this is done quite well. 

Everything from Mina stomping five shrunken men / bugs to Blair swallowing Mina whole and alive.  Well done.

Author's Response:

Thank you for kindly leaving a review. I am always trying to improve and I hope it was a good experience. I believe that you will find your concerns to be answered in the starting story notes before the story itself:
"This is my 13th Entry in the Giantess City Halloween Writing Contest 2021. It needed to be a maximum of 1000 words, have the word "capybara" included, and be Halloween-themed." Those were the requirements to qualify as an official submission in the contest; I had no choice ^_^

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