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Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2021 7:21 PM Title: Ch 1 - Jade's Halloween

Superb short story! Just enough detail to get a feel for the characters and their past relationship and then it's dwindling time.

Half-expected the story to have shrink to near-nothingness while wedged under her toe, before revealing that he had dreamed that outcome and in fact had reached a minimum size.

Good luck with your commissions!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

This won't be the last commission story I write with this commissioner's characters, so look forward to that.

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