Date: September 16 2023 6:47 PM Title: shopping in london
I love the eyes of the main protagonist.
Date: August 30 2022 2:23 AM Title: shopping in london
I loved this story when it first came out, but I am not into hard vore, so that disappointed me a little. Obviously nothing against you, it's my personal opinion. But I am not lying that I was very excited to see you made a soft vore ending! It was very welly executed and I am glad I was able to fully enjoy the story with an ending I like! Great job!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2022 1:24 AM Title: shopping in london
Awesome story! Really! I loved the semi-unaware callousness of the 'giantess' (and the girl in the photos representing her is beaufiful too, who's her?) and your story is now among my top favs!
I also liked the ending, how the giantess ended up eating the teen employee instead of the man, who went with her to America. Hahaha next time better not play with the tiny and help him out! Well, if you're accepting suggestions for alternate endings, how about an ending where the guy manages to somehow escape the giantess and go back to the market, finding the now shrunken girl and living (surviving maybe) with her, forming a tiny couple? And maybe the tiny couple can end eaten alive (together hahaha d84;a039;) by the American giantess.
The only part that confused me a lot was his actual size. The way she interacts with him suggests that the shrunken guy was somewhere between one and two inches tall, but sometimes the sorry described him as being really tiny, smaller than small! Like the scene where he's hit by a droplet described as having the size of a car. This made me visualize him as being about 1/8 inches tall or something. How could the American giantess interact the way she did, even chaining him, if he was THAT small?
Please those are just observations, whatever his size this story's just GREAT! I'm fave'ing it NOW!
The only part that got me confused is the size of
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 9:05 AM Title: shopping in london
This is a very captivating story. I am very impressed with your technique and smooth story telling. I feel you are one of our top tier story writers on the scene. I am looking forward to our next journey with the endless possibilities of protagonists available. I will be interested to see where this story takes us and if we ever find out how the shrinking happened and if it will happen again and who will end up with the Shrinky.
Date: January 06 2022 10:17 AM Title: shopping in london
i have an idea that is very brutal
how about if she thinks she has to cut and or peel it like vegetables? For example, she wants a small piece and cuts a leg
Author's Response:
very mean haha
Date: January 05 2022 4:23 PM Title: shopping in london
i can't wait to read more