[Report This]Date: January 20 2022 2:37 PM Title: A meal to die for
Wow! If this is your debut story, I honestly don't see how you're going to match it. Let alone, top it!
I read all six chapters, straight through, which is a rarity for me. As I usually prefer to read and review each chapter!
Another rarity is the use of selfie-captures for your illustrations. Asukafan used to illustrate his vintage stuff with photo-captures! Sadly, those have become lost in limbo with each new posted edition. I hope you never have the same techno-calamity.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the huge compliment! Lets just say that I've got some fun ideas for when this story is finished. And I've fixed my little error you spotted too.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 9:26 PM Title: A meal to die for
I normally don't like unaware stories that much, but this has really surprised me! I like the writing style and the way things are built up quite slowly (in a good way). Can't wait for the next chapter(s)
Also two side questions: did the woman who first found the protagonist when he shrank know that they were not a product and was she behind the shrinking? And my second question, are those pictures of you yourself?
Author's Response:
The store worker was playing a joke before helping the tiny, but was called away at the wrong time.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2022 4:51 AM Title: A meal to die for
Awesome story, love the detail. The sucking scene was fantastic. The causal cruelness is done very well. Great stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I realy wanted to get across how little she thinks before acting, hope you enjoy the future chapters too :)