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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 3:01 AM Title: Wishes (alt true ending (hard vore))

I reserve judgement till after the soft ending is posted.



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Its out now so come check it out!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 4:43 AM Title: Wishes (alt true ending (hard vore))

First and foremost, the woman whose images are posted in the story is HOT AS HELL!!!  Damn she's friggen sexy!

I read through all your chapters in one sitting, so I can not comment on each previous chapter.

This is a great story.  I really like how he escaped, only to return to Jackie.

The grocery girl who could have saved him, winding up being eaten by Jackie was a nice twist.

Being eaten and digested by Jackie without any thought of what she is doing was a great ending.

WELL DONE!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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