[Report This]Date: April 12 2023 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Hope we get a sequel to this or more stories in this universe
Author's Response:
Thanks for the 5 stars!
As for a sequel or more stories in the universe. Well its a possibility, but I don't have the complete time right now to delve into this universe. However, I did leave the last chapter off in a way that kept that option open, as there is a lot I could do with this universe. Perhaps with a new cast of characters, or perhaps a continuation with the old ones. For the time being, my other story is more of a focus, which I already don't have much time to write about either.
If anything, there might be a series of one shots for this universe until I can dedicate myself to a story for it.
Once again, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 26 2022 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Really enjoyed the story so far!
Reading you critique your own writing made me chuckle as I have never been good at it failing that part of my English exam many years ago I couldn’t tell the difference between this and other stories on the site so I honestly couldn’t give you any feedback there.
I’m usually not a fan of fatal stuff or excess pain especially emotional unless the inflicter completely loved them and they could be resurrected not that I didn’t love Blyke being smashed by a huge ass. This feels like a perfect balance
Whilst like you said in a reply earlier this story is reaching its end and I really hope you either end up making a sequel or another entrance into the same universe or inspire others to write similar given its uniqueness as I’ve not seen any other stories to this scale with the kind of relationship Lena and Blyke have.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
And thanks for the high praise. I still have a lot to work on, things that became more glaringly obvious to me on what I should of done better in earlier chapters now, but I still think I did at least a decent job.
I did say it’s reaching towards its end, but that still means we will have a couple more chapters to go. Blyke and Lena need more time to each other imo and a bit more development for Lena is something I want to give. Who knows, if I’m up for it, I might continue past that or make a sequel. For now, a small break from finishing what was in the scope of this story is what im aiming for. Though I’ll probably leave it with some room for if I want to continue.
I definitely want to add a more action focused chapter for Lena and Blyke. And maybe some other stuff. I guess I have a lot of ideas, but again, would probably only do some of them in a sequel setting.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
I've been meaning to give this puppy a review for awhile. Gentle giga/mega is something that's a rare treat indeed. Too often, writers are focused on making the giantess a sadistic, or indifferent force of destruction. Sure, bobs the size of cities are intriguing, but it's even better when this force of nature actually has some concern for the near-microscopic people at her feet. That's a fun paradox and conflict in of itself.
You struck a nice balance here with your giantess character. She's not delicately gentle, heck in fact, she's dead set on ruling humanity as a goddess, but she understands that to rule, you shouldn't really ruin unless the situation calls for it. Her affection for her soul mate is just icing on the cake. Although I admit, he's not the most interesting tiny character, though I suppose that just comes with the territory.
I do reflect what other reviewers would say, in that, cleaning up the grammar, perspective and tense would do this story a great service. Some stories that aren't my cup of tea (the cruel romps, anything featuring tiny women, NTR), catch my interest when they are written brilliantly. Just keep grinding away, and soon enough, cups of tea for everyone will be sipped over this interesting story.
Author's Response:
As you said, things like grammar, flow of writing and characterisation of some characters weren’t too strong on my end. However I appreciate your kind words and feedback immensely. I suppose it’s expected to have so many flaws considering this is the first story I’m publishing, I can only hope to continue improving.
Once again, thank you for your feedback.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2022 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
First off, great work so far!
Secondly these are my favorite types of stories where the giantess is confident and proud of her power and not afraid to use it on the random hapless tinies yet has unique feelings for a certain special tiny.
If you are looking for ideas based on where the story is at the end of chapter 4. I think it will be interesting to explore her powers once she has full control of his soul. We don't know too much about him yet maybe he's had certain fantasies she can now help him explore to develop a bond. Of course she will always be the dominant one in the relationship but if it's going to be a loving one it will be cute to see her getting to know him and figuring out what he likes.
Now as to what I'd like to see. Maybe she can put his conciousness in different parts of her body. Like her toes, feet tits, pussy. Etc, and go on some galactic scale rampages showing him what shes can do.
She's resolved not to destroy his planet but maybe in a fucked up way as he falls in love with her he'll grow to feel bad for her because of that and tell her its okay to do what she wants because he'll be so over the moon for a gorgeous giantess goddess.
The play between fear and love is the sweetest of all for me in these stories so my advice is dont rush to him beeing all in love too quick but dont keep him a distant afraid whi er too long either.
Your doing great so far so I'm sure I'll enjoy whata coming next.
Author's Response:
Wow, these are all the ideas I could of ever wanted. Thank you very much!
Since she does have mystical powers I’ve walked thought of adding more tags and genres, like you mentioned stuff like transforming into body parts of objects come to mind. Anything can really fly too i guess as long as there is some justification for it.
Also yeah, so far it’s just been a prologue with getting his soul, the real fun starts after. Although I don’t wanna mess up that part so I may be slowing down my releases for that.
The idea of Rampaging through earth sounds great too, perhaps a little bit of fun would fly but I’d rather not turn her completely cruel when she doesn’t need to be. (Although in this universe civilisation outside of earth does exist so…. There is possibility of cruelty like that.)
and yeah, so far I’m trying to keep the play between fear and love. Of course since there is barely anything on our male lead so far he is mostly fearful for now.
once again I’m thankful for the review!
Date: January 17 2022 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This story is quite intresting. I love gentle and Giga but mixing them together can have...mixed results so i'm intrested to see how this will go.
Author's Response:
Am aiming for specifically a somewhat gentle but playful relationship between Male and female MC, the rest can be uh… well yeah, we’ll see.
Date: January 16 2022 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Love this can't wait for more!!!
Date: January 16 2022 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This is a nice story concept! I wonder what the lucky soulmate with think of his soon to be goddess wife. Plus, I like the goddess's personality so far. Nice but not a wimp, indifferent to the humans who do not interest her, playful when humans foolishly give her an excuse.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This story looks really interesting! I'm very curious to see how she interacts with her tiny soul mate, and how he'll react to her. Will he be a totally willing and submissive partner through his own will, or will the feelings be forced on him by some magical force? I have to imagine it would be a pretty confusing and crazy experience to suddenly have a Goddess show up one day and claim you as her partner, so I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here! I also always love a gentle and loving relationship, so this looks right up my alley.
In terms of suggestions, my only one would be to include a distinction between the normal text, and what your main girl is thinking in the moment. For example, at one point you have "I can feel you, I can Sense you, I Must Have You. I think in my head while biting my lower lip." Since the story is in the first person, it might be easier to read if you have thoughts in italics, like:
"I can feel you, I can sense you, I must have you, I think while biting my lower lip." You could also use quotation marks instead, as if it was a piece of dialogue, followed by the "I think" dialogue tag. Other than that, though, this is a great start with a really interesting premise, and I'm sure you'll get better as you write more! Thanks for sharing your work with us, and I look forward to the next chapter! Take care~
-Pluto
Author's Response:
OMG it’s Pluto Pendragon. I really like your story of an innocent man. One of my favs in the entire site.
Anyway, I think your completely right about the italics, again I’m quite new to this but using them to offer a distinction in the writing is a really good idea. Thanks for your Input!
Date: January 15 2022 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank You!