[Report This]Date: April 02 2022 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 11. A Small Dispute.
I really liked the fact that Blyke actually questions the morality of what she does even if he stopped pushing her almost immediately. I really enjoy this type of conflict especially when it aids in character development. Im hoping he gradually starts to rub off on her once he finds the opportunity to stand his ground. Because its not like she's gonna let him permanently die. The worst thing she could do is pull a Dormamu because she'll keep bringing him back. Anyways I look forward to seeing how this story progresses.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The coming chapters will most likely cause a shift in their attitudes together, but no promises. After all a massive change in the giantess’ behaviour or Blykes behaviour isn’t really possible. The next best thing is some sort of compromise. Still though, I’m happy to see people picking up on what i was trying to do in this chapter, I understand I’m still quite poor as a writer so I wasn’t sure how the “small dispute” would be received. But I’m glad I’m the end. Once again thanks for reading.