Reviews For Aroma's Butt Bug
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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2022 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story.  Is Stephen really going to "spend the rest of his days in-between her butt-cheeks", or are you going to extend your story {perhaps Stephen going in Aroma's butt}?

"Giantess-In-Chief" is also a good story.  Out of curiosity, why didn't you just add this as your next chapter to "Giantess-In-Chief" or are you going to add on to that story separately?

I like the fart on a tiny scenario, even though some others may not.  It really adds to the "Everyone loves a woman in power" aspect you mention, at least in my humble opinion.

You also have a nice, straight forward writing style.  You're not bogged down with miscellaneous details {e.g. How did Stephen shrink?}, instead your stories flow along at an enjoyable pace.  Well done.

You do have a few grammatical issues with your paragraphs, such as: “'Sounds like he enjoyed being stuck to your butt,' Aroma told her friend. 'Right? You like this big ol’ booty, don’t you? Turn around.' Rebekah was smirking now. Did Stephen really enjoy being stuck to her butt?"

It's hard to tell who is saying what in that paragraph; though it does not detract from your story in the least.

Looking forward to more of your work.  Kudos!!!

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