[Report This]Date: June 01 2022 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Envy's Only Natural
I spy, with my Anglo eyes, "gusta", which means were dealing with someone with heritage stemming from the Iberian peninsula.
Vivian, cheering on Emil's jealous disposition, was one of the most genuinely adorable things I've seen. Emil, getting, "payback" was one of the most genuinely endearing things Vivian did for him. Another fuzzy chapter all around.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2022 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sick Day
That's a nice first part. Emil and Vivian have a good chemistry.
I found Vivian really funny and caring, I like it.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2022 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Working Out
This was a great read, adorable, but also with an added kinky aspect of this giant buff lady encouraging (and satisfying) her tiny boyfriend.
I love Vivan XD You really did a great job in both these chapters describing her physicality, and just the start of this chapter with her doing pushups while sweating was dscribed so well.
I hope to see more of these two.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2022 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 2: Working Out
This one was a fun one. Sometimes it was hard to follow where exactly Emil was on Vivian, I'd flesh out some of the descriptions with regards to that in future installments. On the other hand, it does keep the story moving, you don't want to get bogged up in excess descriptions.
I really like both characters, Emil's contemplative, if sedentary attitude, and Vivian's Alpha-dog go-getter view. A sweaty giantess workout is always going to be top-tier stuff on my list. You've established a very loving, mutually respectful relationship with these characters. I hope I get invited to the wedding.
P.S: Red eyes and white hair is a combo men of culture appreciate.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2022 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sick Day
I love gentle, slice of life stories like this.