Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2022 2:22 AM Title: Akari's Expedition

Cute story.  A little hard to follow because of two reasons. 

First, you need to divide up your paragraphs according to subject.

Second, the two girls names are almost identical, making it a bit confusing who is saying or doing what.

Otherwise a very entertaining story.  Love how Aruze is so focused upon Akari's feet with her complete devotion and attention.  A true foot worshiper's point of view, very nice indeed.