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Reviewer: SPACE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2024 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: The Memories of Megan Harriet

Great story!

i hope it will be continued soon.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Capture of Matthew Kane

So I am not exactly sure on how to make the font size changing thing work, but my guess is that you are pasting in from microsoft word?   Maybe you need to save the file separately as just text and paste in the text only version?

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Date: January 12 2024 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Assassination of Cindy Mitchells

Great chapter!



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thank you!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Capture of Matthew Kane

A lot of stories allow the + - font size to work, but your story doesn't for some reason.  Can you fix this?   I need to make the font bigger...

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Sorry to hear that. How do I go about fixing this? I can't see any option to

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Memories of Cindy Mitchells

Ok, I saw the title of chapter 21 and that helped me a little bit.   I think I was so confused because the transitions between the past and the present day weren't very clear to me on the first reading of this chapter.   I guess if you are going to mix past with present, maybe you could try to delineate it a little more clearly.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much for the feedback! Looking back, I can see how the chapter is a little confusing. I'm glad you figured it out

Reviewer: SPACE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2023 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Capture of Matthew Kane

This story is one of the best I have ever read on this website. I love the dynamic relationship between Thomas and Cindy. Thomas not knowing how to deal with his feelings about Cindy  who loves to play him like a toy.  I hope you get back to this story soon. 



Author's Response:

Glad to hear that, thanks for the review! The relationship between main characters is one of the most important aspects of fiction, isn't it?

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2022 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Capture of Matthew Kane

This is a very interesting series on the take of a female police officer who uses her shrinking power to put criminals in their place as for Thomas he started ING to have a Big crush towards Cindy and wanting to be her boytoy which I think is alright seeing as it a desire most people have towards being dominated, looking forward to more chapters when you return to this series 



Author's Response:

I have returned! I appreciate your positive feedback. I'm guess you'd want to be her boytoy as well?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2022 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Revelation of Henry Lynch

So let me get this straight. The Satyr is recreating giantess videos in real life? Whoa, this is amazing! I’m ready to direct some vids so hopefully he sees them. 

This chapter reminds me of the movie “Se7en”. That crime scene movie with Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman. The clues that connect each crime scene which might help predict future ones. Except this story makes all the crime so hot!

Imagine a new story about a kidnapped giantess sex slave that escapes the giantess and then fans make giantess vids from that, and then the Satyr has Aphrodite kidnap a tiny and post several videos often detailing how that person will be her slave “forever” and such. Just an example is some back and forth between the reality and Satyr’s creations. 

Lastly, I like how the last video about the giantess cop in prison means it’s going to be Cindy sitting on someone. The fact that Thomas asked to join her meant he wanted to be sat on. I mean, that’s gotta be the main reason lol. He connected the dots and realized that joining her would lead to Aphrodite forcing Cindy to sit on Thomas. 

I guess Cindy knew it too so he gave that shrink threat. Lol. Cindy gotta make those threats sexual next time. “Stay here or I will shrink you and shove you in my ass if you try and follow me”. Now that’s actually tempting. Lol. 

Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for the long wait, but I'm back! Hopefully you're still active on this site.

I love the idea about a sex slave leaning into it and making content, it really plays with the media theme that I'm going for here. I feel like Thomas has a dual motivation. In reality, he wants to he can help as much as he can with the case, even if it means putting himself in danger. But there's always a small part of him that wants to be put in a humiliating situation, which he can deduce is going to happen to someone.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2022 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Revelation of Henry Lynch

These last two chapters are great. 

I like some of the subtleties you wrote in, such as Cindy's previous career paying for her current life style.  What exactly did Cindy do in her last profession?

Cindy taking Thomas home trapped, zipped up in her jean shorts was truly hot.  Especially Thomas' little {pardon the pun} reaction "Ah, let me go"; knowing full well he wanted to stay in Cindy's "sweet aroma" shorts.

Thomas seems conflicted.  He appears to want to live the lifestyle of a shrunken man in the possession of a woman like Cindy; while at the same time in fear for his life.  Will Thomas decide to give up control, and even the existence of his own life in return for the submission to the power over life and death, and control of his destiny to Cindy?  

The playing out of the video in reality is also hot, considering Cindy actually had a shrunken Thomas in her mouth and able to swallow him without Thomas being able to resist.  Though not written out in detail, the fact Thomas was inside Cindy's mouth and she spit him out rather than swallowing him is an image left to the reader's imagination.  VERY HOT!

As to this chapter, it's cool how Henry was able to make the connection between past online videos and the Goatman's current actions.  Perhaps Cindy could set a trap by making a hot and sexy Giantess video with very specific details (including both her and Thomas in disguise), post date it, and wait for the Goatman to arrive to try and recreate it.

As to Alana, is there any chance Cindy could shrink Henry along with a backpack full of video / audio equipment and batteries, then show up at Alana's home and give her a shrunken 2"-6" Henry for a week or so?  That way Alana could experience a shrunken man all to herself and find out more about what she is worried about in her online posts.  All why it is being recorded or even broadcast to viewers.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Cindy's previous career will remain a mystery for now. I'm not even sure if I will reveal it in this story.

I mean, if you were in Thomas's shoes and this were ACTUALLY happening to you, won't you have conflicted feelings of desire and fear?

I'm glad you enjoyed what I did with the video, just trying out a new style for writing a giantess scene.

Cindy making her own video would be a very good plan. Let's see what the plot has in store for them.

At this point, I don't think Cindy is really concerned about Alana's opinion. While she is a reporter with a very influential voice, Cindy is dealing with a real murderer or murderers. If Alana received a shrunken man, she would probably be horrified based on her past opinions.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2022 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Study Date of Cindy Mitchells and Thomas Phealan

I just love how Cindy just has all the power in every scene and makes Thomas follow her lead. Such a great duo. 

One thing that stood out to me was that prisoner video that the Worshipper was reviewing. It was the use of the plastic doll or action figure. Personally, when I watch giantess porn, I prefer them using a 3 inch tall action figure that could fit in certain holes compared to the digital people shrunken. 

Maybe it’s just that the budget is low, but the cgi shrunken people sometimes glitch through the giantess’s hands or are moving in unnatural directions and it doesn’t work for me. 

However, as a person who loves giantess panties and insertion, a tiny action figure is perfect since you could see them put the tiny person in their mouth. Sometimes a giantess puts the doll in their panties and you could see the bump in their crotch and I find that so hot! 

But my favorite ones have to be the videos of those giantesses managing to insert an action figure inside their pussy. There’s not many out there, but for the few that I have seen, I find it exhilarating to watch a pussy just devour the tiny toy and you could see the pussy lips just close up when the doll is completely inside. 

Those scenes are pure gold to me. So that’s probably one opinion that I disagree with the Worshipper. Looks like I would’ve enjoyed that video even more than him. I would have loved to see that giantess smother that action figure with her crotch. 

Moving on to the acting scenes with Cindy, I was a little confused and couldn’t tell if she was copying every act that was in the video. It seemed like she did, but the focus seemed to be on the video and I couldn’t tell what Cindy was doing for half the time. 

I liked Thomas’s reaction at the end when Cindy put him in her mouth. Now he’s gotta try more videos with her. Imagine they watch a video where a giantess wraps up a tiny and mummifies him so he could barely move. Then the giantess slowly inserts him inside her. While I don’t see Cindy doing that to Thomas, their reactions alone would be worth it. 

Speaking of more intimate parts, that cliffhanger was amazing. She was one layer of fabric from putting Thomas in her pleasure zone. I mean, if I was Thomas, I would climb into her panties and try to get comfortable. I would never leave! Lol. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

That's veeery interesting that you prefer action figures over CGI tinies. The Worshipper's opinion is a reflection of mine: for some reason I've always preferred when the tinies were CGI. Probably because I like seeing them squirm around and scream "help". The tiny's misery is part of the fun. But I totally get what you're saying, things like panty entrapment and insertion are more visually appealing and detailed when they're using a real life prop. I've never discussed with a fellow fetisher about this kind of thing, so your opinions are fascinating to me.

I would say Cindy was imitating a good portion of the video. She did follow the same actions, such as kissing him and squeezing him between her breasts. She most likely did not copy all of the dialogue, since that would be ridiculous. I'm sorry if the scene was confusing, I think there's a lot of implying that I'm asking of both readers and myself. That idea of a mummified tiny is awesome, I might incorporate it in this story if it fits the narrative. Thank you

I wonder what's more comfortable, inside pants or inside panties? One is definitely riskier and a lot wetter haha. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Growing of Cindy Mitchells

This was a funny chapter. The idea of having a giantess can help them in their investigation actually made me laugh. I mean, this Henry guy is basically me, or any one of us. 

I loved how Cindy sat on his bed and wanted Henry to sit next to her. That’s the subtle but playfully dominant Cindy I know. She’s know he likes her so she plays with the idea of the hot woman on a guy’s bed and then wants to sit close to her. He must be nervous and excited at the same time. 

Part of me was hoping that besides the video, maybe Henry had some explicit drawings of Cindy or maybe a Barbie doll dressed in a police uniform holding a tiny doll in her hand. Or imagine Henry has his own diary like Thomas and Cindy starts reading it. Lol. 

With the Worshipper on the team, imagine Henry asking Cindy to shrink him to experience his own fantasy. Thomas would likely be jealous, but it’s not every day that your celebrity giantess crush shows up to your house and ask you to join her team. Might as well ask for a favor in return, haha!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I get so happy whenever you pick up on Cindy's subtle flirting. It's probably the best part about the character. If I were Henry, my heart would be beating out of my chest.

Here's the thing: Henry is an obsessive giantess fan, but Cindy is not his crush. He only really knew about Cindy recently, and he sees her as an amazing and sexy person that can bring his fantasies to reality, rather than the love of his life. He is more obsessed with the concept of gigantism rather than Cindy herself. He would also be trying his hardest to hide his fetish from his mom, or else he would probably have many giantess posters and whatnot.

Thanks for reviewing as always!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Growing of Cindy Mitchells

Another terrific chapter. 

Before I comment on this chapter, I must comment on part of your reply to my last comment.  Your responded "I think it is safe to assume that Aphrodite always has a tiny with her somewhere, she is an evil and horny bastard haha".  You definitely need to state that somewhere in your story line.  THAT'S HOT!

Although you do not go into exacting detail as to Cindy growing herself into a Giantess, one assumes she grew herself after Jack was dropped in her mouth, and Aphrodite took off running.  After all, Cindy was able to arrest all five remaining bad guys according to the news report.  Six bad guys, one dead, presumably the one smushed in Cindy's cleavage, the four gun men, and Jack who was dropped in Cindy's mouth.

Since Aphrodite it missing, and Cindy can not use her powers on her, Aphrodite must have run off telling the four gun men to kill Cindy as Aphrodite herself escaped.  It seems that Aphrodite herself does not know the full extent of her powers.

I do not know Alicia's temperament, whether she likes using her powers; but if she has the ability to shrink people, why not shrink Desmond so that he could either hide someplace on or IN her body, or small enough to squirm out of her bra so she could regrow him so he could escape?  Can she not counter the science behind Aphrodite shrinking him to a particular size?  Or perhaps Alicia likes Desmond exactly where he is?

Of course who can not relate to the guy watching Giantess Porn (he he he) when now Detective Cindy Mitchells and Officer Thomas Phealan come to interrogate him about the Giantess fetish?  Kind of like the "Warlock" character in "Live Free or Die Hard", living with his mom and playing on the computer all day.  A person extremely intimate with the subject matter.

Perhaps for his cooperation, she can reward Henry Lynch by offering to shrink him in exchange for helpful information, and allow him his place of choice on or in Cindy's body, or just kept as her pet (that would drive Thomas insane with jealousy) or giving to some girl?  Would be quite the bargain, giving up information in exchange for the actual lived personal experience as a tiny to Detective Cindy Mitchells.

As to the two gun men stuffed in Giantess Officer Cindy Mitchells' armpits, that was fantastic.  How she knocked them both unconscious by simply stuffing them in her armpits and closing her arms over them, how powerful and sexy of Cindy.

I do not mean to self promote, but you may want to check out my posted story "Rachelle's Sweat Pads".

Thomas must be going crazy with lust, he just watched Cindy pin a man under her foot, smush two more men unconscious in her armpits, and stuff yet another man deep between her ass cheeks (AGAIN!) then asks "Anyone else?" only to glance at him as she casually says "Hi Thomas."  I like that Cindy said “You deserve a reward.” then shoved that guy between her butt cheeks; as if she now considers a man stuffed within her ass cheeks as an honor and a prize for them.  Especially after they obey Cindy and refer to her as "my Goddess".

Can not wait to read more.  You have an exceptional story going on here. 



Author's Response:

Okay cool, I'm glad the math was accurate. I'm not the best at describing growth scenes, which is why I just decided to depict the before and after, I hope it was clear enough. You are correct, Aphrodite escaped after seeing Cindy's growth, leaving the poor/lucky guards to deal with the giant cop. I won't touch on Alicia since not much about her has been said.

Lol I think it's pretty clear that Henry was drawn from my own experiences. A lot of what he thinks about is what I think about when I'm watching giantess porn. I would go crazy if someone like Cindy came to my house. I think that's a good idea, he should definitely take advantage of this situation and see if Cindy is willing to shrink him. I know I definitely would.

Thank you! I wasn't confident about the giant Cindy scene, so I'm happy you thought it was hot. I think Thomas, as usual, was very uncomfortable and turned on while watching her dominate those gunmen. Thanks for reading as always, I appreciate it

Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue

This is a fun story! I hope you keep up the good work! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'll try my best to consistently upload

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue

Wow! This might be the best plot twist ever! 

The Satyr’s whole motive was Femdom! I love this dude now! He’s literally taking my fantasy and making it a reality. Sure, it’s strange how he’s doing it with all these murders with Megan, but the effect it has on people and the way the news describes it is awesome! 

Usually, when I think of someone trying to promote Femdom in real life, they try to incorporate it into a movie or something so audiences could see how Femdom could be a normal thing.

But to directly have it involved like this is beyond even my own imagination and I love it, because it’s like the next step of what I may imagine later on. 

At first, I wasn’t a fan of all these murders, but now that I see it as a means to inflict fear on to the public, this is genius!

Back to this chapter. Wow, I love how Megan has control over everything. It did feel weird to see Cindy so helpless, but I don’t mind since I’m actually liking Megan a little bit now too. 

Looks like the shrinking abilities are more complex than we thought. Megan definitely has figured out a way to maximize its effectiveness and neutralize anyone else with shrinking powers.  

I love the interrogation scene where Megan uses Cindy to torture the tiny guys. Man, that was hot. Also, I found it funny that Cindy thought Megan wanted oral when she got tied up. Lol. Classic Cindy, always horny. 

Now Thomas is approaching the scene. Part of me wonders if Megan kidnaps Thomas and keeps him hostage in her panties. Imagine Cindy tied up and forced to watch as Megan slowly picks up a tiny Thomas and lowers him down to her panties while Cindy can’t do anything. 

Or actually, what if Megan dropped Thomas into Cindy’s panties instead. Maybe, Cindy gets knocked unconscious and Megan slides Thomas in there before Cindy wakes up and then Cindy wakes up feeling horny and finds Thomas down there. 

Ok, I’m fantasizing way too much, but I love the twist in this chapter. The bad guy, is actually ….. on my side, I guess. Lol. I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so so so happy to hear that you've warmed up to the murders. I was unsure whether Satyr's motivation made sense, so I'm very glad you liked it. I would say this villain is a reflection of all of us lurking on this website lol

Yep, it's pretty strange to see our dominant protagonist in a powerless position. There is so much about the world and herself that she is naive to, including her powers

I love your scene concept of Megan kidnapping Thomas and forcing him in Cindy's panties. Especially because Cindy would wake up and...kind of like it. Maybe she would even keep him down there

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue

Some big {pardon the pun} questions have to asked from this chapter.

Who is Alicia?  Is she Megan's sister, and perhaps the kidnapped nurse?  After all, the nurse told Desmond this was all her fault yet never explained why.

Why can't Cindy shrink people now that she is tied up?  What happened to her powers?

Cindy shrunk men in their clothing, how could she not realize she could shrink material objects?

Is the Satyr / goat really a man, or perhaps actually a woman?  If the Satyr is really a man, I agree with his "world of goddesses".

However his quick ending, being smushed to death in Cindy's amazing and all powerful cleavage; combined with spending so much time in Aphrodite's panty that guy had one heck of a final day on Earth.

Now the most confusing question, why is Thomas seeing Cindy as a Giantess?  Are the gunmen surrounding her also giant?  Which would mean Thomas is probably already shrunk and does not realize it.

A lot of questions, awaiting a lot of answers.

By the way, hope Cindy actually swallows Jack.  Does Aphrodite have someone(s) in her right high heel, maybe just for balance or further encouragement for Cindy?



Author's Response:

These are some great questions! I'll try to answer them as best as I can, but I won't reveal any spoilers for the future:

Alicia is Cindy's sister, who is the kidnapped nurse. She is the same woman who was strapped to the table, who asked Desmond whether her boob was comfortable

Cindy is not able to shrink Megan because she has the same powers. The two cannot use their powers on each other. Cindy is also unable to shrink anyone else because Megan is using her powers to keep them at a normal size. Science has made Megan's powers more advanced

To answer why Cindy could shrink people's clothing and not objects, you need to understand the interesting relationship between Cindy and her powers. Cindy simply views her powers as a "tool" at her disposal, and does not put much time into contemplating its full potential. She shrinks people's clothes because it is convenient, but she has never thought to shrink random objects. It is also a lot harder to shrink an object alone, but Megan is able to consistently do so through practice

This becomes clearer in the next chapter, but at the end of the chapter Cindy has realized how much she had been slacking with her powers after seeing what Megan did with them. So she focuses on herself and grows into a giantess. In the last scene, Thomas and the gunmen are normal size, but Cindy is a giant

Now to respond to your other comments. I'm really happy with people's responses to Satyr's motivation. Interesting theory about him, stay tuned to find out. I think a person's last day being stuck in panties and crushed to death between boobs is both horrifying and glorious. I feel a lot of envy and pity for the man. I think it is safe to assume that Aphrodite always has a tiny with her somewhere, she is an evil and horny bastard haha

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2022 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Arrest of Zachary Zotterman

Monster = DOMINANT GODDESS!  Well at least that's my hope and impression.  The nurse and Desmond Jackson are an interesting combo.  It was nice that she asked if her boob was comfortable.

Seems Cindy is teasing Thomas with going in her ass; perhaps Thomas is realizing he desires both Cindy's huge breasts AND her luscious ass.  Who wouldn't?  Perhaps Cindy could catch Thomas staring at her ass daydreaming with either a big smile or drooling a little.

Too bad Cindy let Zotterman out, a miniature assassin could make a handy spy, or at least a nice gift for her friend Rachel.  Speaking of which, will she be making her way back in the story?

The Porsche and panty scene with Aphrodite is hot, especially the “Do me a favor and squirm,” part.  Lucky bastard.

Melbourne Prison, that explains why Zotterman checked Cindy's uniform hanging in her closet for a gun.  In America police take their gun belts off, they do not keep their weapons on their uniforms in the closet.  I was wondering why you wrote that, you're either in Australia or another British / former British country.  Good Day Mate



Author's Response:

To many people, a dominant goddess would be a terrifying monster, so you are spot on. I would say Thomas doesn't really act like a pervert, although perverted thoughts are starting to frequently cross his mind. He would be always trying his best to hide anything that he desires, maybe even to himself. He should really just submit to being Cindy's slave, but oh well, I suppose there's a murder to solve.

A shrunken assassin would be a great asset to their team, although I don't know how willing Zotterman would be to fill that role. Then again, a little bit of sexy threatening from Cindy might do the trick. Rachel is a minor character in this story, so don't expect to see too much from her. If you do, she probably will not impact the plot too much. She was just a convenient plot tool as Cindy's friend and for autopsies.

I'm glad that Porsche scene worked out, the lucky man is in for a sudden but sexy night.

I'm sorry if there was any confusion about the location, let me clear things up. Distropolis is a completely fictional place, and I tried to not specify which country the city is in. I did this so I don't have to worry about the legal restrictions of each country, especially because I'm telling a murder story with cops. I chose the name "Melbourne Prison" because it sounded fitting, and it has nothing to do with Melbourne, Australia. Sorry about that, I hope it makes sense now. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2022 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Arrest of Zachary Zotterman

Yes!!!!  

That final scene with the assassin was perfect! I really like this idea of having Thomas be scared of Cindy and this looks like a great way to do that. 

I could already see Thomas nervously talking to Cindy in the future and once she detects this, she’s going to want to know the reason, and then Thomas has to explain it, which actually makes Cindy horny as she listens to how deadly her ass is. 

If that’s the direction you are going for, I’m super excited for it! 

Aphrodite seems to be staging a new video soon. The guy on the phone is clearly organizing something so I guess it’s a new experiment soon. Maybe Aphrodite will shove both guys in the tied woman’s holes and then Aphrodite uses a strap on to kill both of them. Completely messed up, but also super hot. And it will lead to 2 deaths which is more severe than last time and adds pressure to Cindy.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I feel like some giantesses, including Cindy, do not really understand what it's like to be tightly trapped in someone's ass (of course, they're not the ones experiencing it). They probably have the perception that "it's hot so the tiny must like it", when the truth is a lot more complicated. Yes, the concept of being in someone's butt is exciting and fun, but is it in practice? And if these giantesses realized what kind of experience they're inflicting on their victims, would they change their behaviour or not care?

I like your idea of Aphrodite killing men with a strap-on using the kidnapped woman. I think strap-ons are another item that are not used enough in giantess content. You are right, something is coming, so stay tuned...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Assassination of Cindy Mitchells

Now we see the side of Cindy that scares people. For most of the story, it was just rumors and that incident with that other officer she was previously partnered with. 

But now we get a true tale of what happens when someone gets on Cindy’s bad side.

I like how Cindy takes the high road and says she doesn’t want to kill him, but toys with him instead. And to be fair, he’s not a threat anymore. He’s now reduced to her toy and she’s completely fine with that. I’m sure she will likely play with him to get more information to find the Satyr guy later on. 

After reading this chapter, part of me wants Thomas to get on her bad side. Not something too drastic, but enough to make Cindy toy with him to teach him a lesson lol. 

Also, if this is what Cindy does to assassins, send me her location and I will gladly make a visit. Haha! 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

No matter how scary or unethical Cindy is, she will always have that moral compass of not killing people. I wonder if this makes her more or less sexy. I feel like Thomas is one of the few people that don't get on Cindy's nerves, and he's always trying very hard to not piss her off. Maybe he will one day make her angry enough for some punishment. Haha, yes I'd also want to be her assassin, only to willingly walk into the trap. Thanks for reading!

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Date: April 05 2022 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Assassination of Cindy Mitchells

     In chapter 10, after Officers Mitchells and Phealan watched the video, Thomas says “The woman, Aphrodite. That was Megan Harriet. It pretty much confirms what the Satyr said.”  Shouldn’t that be “…confirms what the Gryphon said.”? 

     In chapter 11, the admitting of Thomas in his diary came out in very small print size; I think you may want to reload those final lines so they are in normal font size rather than appearing as part of the “Chapter End Notes”.

     You also have bleed ins between statements.  One person says one thing but their statements are continued in the same paragraph of the next person talking.  It's a bit confusing, yet still understandable.

     Those are my complaints.  Now to my praise.

     Aphrodite crushing one guy in her cleavage and dropping Desmond Jackson in the front of her panty is hot as hell.  One can only dream of Megan Harriet / Aphrodite dropping them inside of her panty.

     The dream sequence of Thomas being crushed between Officer Cindy Mitchells' breasts was fantastic, and shows Thomas slowing succumbing to the sexual powers of Cindy.  How far will this go, especially since Cindy ridiculed Thomas by asking if he wanted to sit on her lap.

     Cindy disrobing and disarming Shadow Stalker is great, especially her casual disposal of him between her butt cheeks to deal with later.  It would be nice if she decides to deal with him much later and simply stuffs him up her asshole; but one can only dream.

     Again, great story!



Author's Response:

In Chapter 10, Thomas says it confirms what Satyr said, referring to the fact that Satyr admitted to the murders. The fact that he is with Megan Harriet confirms that this is all a connected scheme.

I tried to fix the last part of chapter 11, and I can't seem to figure it out. Oh well, it's not the biggest deal, but I'll give it another try.

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed these different aspects of the plot. Look forward to more!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2022 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Discussion of Aphrodite

Very interesting to see multiple perspectives on this video. 

So the mysterious woman was a school teacher. Damn, that’s hot! Giantess teachers are one of my favorite topics, and I even have my own story about one. 

I also like the recording from Desmond’s point of view. While I would love to see him trapped in her panties for a bit longer, I like how described how she used him like a toy and how his body betrayed him. 

The comments by the Worshipper are exactly as I what I was thinking. Even though it’s messed up, it’s sexy, and that’s hot. Especially since it’s a giantess fantasy becoming real. And the Aphrodite’s video was very sexual so I don’t blame them. Lol. 

For Thomas, those 2 points in the diary are something that I also agree with. Is it healthy, probably not, but I’m not opposed to it. Lol. 

It’s also cool to see Thomas falling in love with Cindy while he’s trying to get over being scared of her. I do enjoy the moments when Cindy does scare him though. It’s hot to see her mess with him. ;)

I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah giantess teachers are so hot. I used to have this attractive teacher in middle school, and she kept wearing clothes that revealed her cleavage (who tf wears that to a middle school lol), and I kept imagining a tiny hand reaching out of there, crying for help. Don't tell her I said that

I appreciate your thoughts on Desmond, the Worshipper, and Thomas. I tried to make each have a different take on the giantess fetish.

Yes there's nothing hotter than Cindy messing with people. I just wish she existed in real life. Or maybe I shouldn't?

Thanks for reading!

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