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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2022 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Contemplation of Thomas Phealan

Love this sequence of events. First we get that backstory of when Thomas saw Cindy in the bathroom and now we have this meeting where Thomas is scared. 

Also, I like the dialogue with her friend Rachel. It is a good way to show how Cindy is feeling and I like how she described Thomas as a toy. Can’t wait for that to become a reality. 

Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Telling Thomas's story in diary-format was a little bit of an experiment for me, but I think it turned out pretty well. Thanks for reading, can't wait to see how you react to what's coming

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