[Report This]Date: March 28 2022 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Murder of Eric Scimitar
Wait a minute… Rachel McAdams as in the actress? Wow, I didn’t expect that. I’ve always had a crush on her so this is a pleasant surprise.
Anyway, my favorite part of this chapter was that final interrogation scene. Wow, I love how sensual it starts off as. At first, I didn’t expect Cindy to do anything since she said she was only there to talk, but wow, I’m glad she lied about that lol.
The way she straddled his chair and slowly shrank him so the pleasure of her sitting on him became painful over time is brilliant!
I now could easily see Cindy telling someone such as Thomas something similar asking if he wanted to be in her pants, but then she actually meant literally stuffing him inside her crotch.
Man, Cindy’s character is simply amazing and I can’t get enough of her. Her flirtatious and teasing words are addicting and I could read about her playful banter all day long.
Combine that with all the erotic activity she does and she easily could be one of my favorite giantesses of all time. She’s so naughty and I love it!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I did not realize I ripped off the name of the real life actress. Oh well, now it's a glorified cameo.
Yeah, Cindy is a pretty horny cop, I think she would take any opportunity to shrink someone because it's fun. I could totally see her saying something like that to Thomas. Thanks for reading as always :)
Date: March 28 2022 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Murder of Eric Scimitar
Very nice addition to your captivating story.
I do have one complaint, and I'm sure it's one you share as well. It's your paragraph spacing. For instance, when you wrote about the comments to the YouTube video in your previous chapter, the comments were confusing to follow because they were not divided by commentator. The same follows through with the rest of your story.
Somehow a comment made by one person is being broken up into more than one paragraph; and a bunch of comments made by multiple people are being combined into one paragraph. That make following along the story line tedious, a sad flaw to such a terrific story.
I really like how Officer Thomas Phealan is trying to hide the fact he loved being shrunken and trapped deep in Officer Cindy Mitchells' cleavage.
It is also nice to hear that forensic pathologist Rachel McAdams is an actual friend of Officer Cindy Mitchells and trying to help her friend. Hmmm, perhaps the two could be secret lovers?
Perhaps you could write more about what happened between Megan Harriet and the suspect Alicia.
Why did Cindy take a photo of the Gryphon's head smothered in her cleavage during the jailhouse interview?
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
So initially I was using tabs as a way to indicate the separation of the comments, but this website apparently doesn't like them. Oh well, I don't think I write about a comment section again, but if I do I'll try to format it better. Thanks for letting me know, it's always appreciated.
That's an interesting idea that the two could be secret lovers. It would definitely spice up the giantess scenes. As for Megan and Alicia, they're both part of the mystery so stay tuned to find out how they're involved in all this.
Cindy probably took that photo because she is an Insta-whore, lmao