[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Arrest of Zachary Zotterman
Monster = DOMINANT GODDESS! Well at least that's my hope and
impression. The nurse and Desmond Jackson are an interesting combo. It was nice that she asked if her boob was comfortable.
Seems
Cindy is teasing Thomas with going in her ass; perhaps Thomas is
realizing he desires both Cindy's huge breasts AND her luscious ass.
Who wouldn't? Perhaps Cindy could catch Thomas staring at her ass daydreaming with either a big smile or drooling a little.
Too bad Cindy let Zotterman out, a miniature assassin could make a handy spy, or at least a nice gift for her friend Rachel. Speaking of which, will she be making her way back in the story?
The Porsche and panty scene with Aphrodite is hot, especially the “Do me a favor and squirm,” part. Lucky bastard.
Melbourne Prison, that explains why Zotterman checked Cindy's uniform hanging in her closet for a gun. In America police take their gun belts off, they do not keep their weapons on their uniforms in the closet. I was wondering why you wrote that, you're either in Australia or another British / former British country. Good Day Mate
Author's Response:
To many people, a dominant goddess would be a terrifying monster, so you are spot on. I would say Thomas doesn't really act like a pervert, although perverted thoughts are starting to frequently cross his mind. He would be always trying his best to hide anything that he desires, maybe even to himself. He should really just submit to being Cindy's slave, but oh well, I suppose there's a murder to solve.
A shrunken assassin would be a great asset to their team, although I don't know how willing Zotterman would be to fill that role. Then again, a little bit of sexy threatening from Cindy might do the trick. Rachel is a minor character in this story, so don't expect to see too much from her. If you do, she probably will not impact the plot too much. She was just a convenient plot tool as Cindy's friend and for autopsies.
I'm glad that Porsche scene worked out, the lucky man is in for a sudden but sexy night.
I'm sorry if there was any confusion about the location, let me clear things up. Distropolis is a completely fictional place, and I tried to not specify which country the city is in. I did this so I don't have to worry about the legal restrictions of each country, especially because I'm telling a murder story with cops. I chose the name "Melbourne Prison" because it sounded fitting, and it has nothing to do with Melbourne, Australia. Sorry about that, I hope it makes sense now. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 07 2022 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Arrest of Zachary Zotterman
Yes!!!!
That final scene with the assassin was perfect! I really like this idea of having Thomas be scared of Cindy and this looks like a great way to do that.
I could already see Thomas nervously talking to Cindy in the future and once she detects this, she’s going to want to know the reason, and then Thomas has to explain it, which actually makes Cindy horny as she listens to how deadly her ass is.
If that’s the direction you are going for, I’m super excited for it!
Aphrodite seems to be staging a new video soon. The guy on the phone is clearly organizing something so I guess it’s a new experiment soon. Maybe Aphrodite will shove both guys in the tied woman’s holes and then Aphrodite uses a strap on to kill both of them. Completely messed up, but also super hot. And it will lead to 2 deaths which is more severe than last time and adds pressure to Cindy.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I feel like some giantesses, including Cindy, do not really understand what it's like to be tightly trapped in someone's ass (of course, they're not the ones experiencing it). They probably have the perception that "it's hot so the tiny must like it", when the truth is a lot more complicated. Yes, the concept of being in someone's butt is exciting and fun, but is it in practice? And if these giantesses realized what kind of experience they're inflicting on their victims, would they change their behaviour or not care?
I like your idea of Aphrodite killing men with a strap-on using the kidnapped woman. I think strap-ons are another item that are not used enough in giantess content. You are right, something is coming, so stay tuned...