[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue
This is a fun story! I hope you keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'll try my best to consistently upload
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue
Wow! This might be the best plot twist ever!
The Satyr’s whole motive was Femdom! I love this dude now! He’s literally taking my fantasy and making it a reality. Sure, it’s strange how he’s doing it with all these murders with Megan, but the effect it has on people and the way the news describes it is awesome!
Usually, when I think of someone trying to promote Femdom in real life, they try to incorporate it into a movie or something so audiences could see how Femdom could be a normal thing.
But to directly have it involved like this is beyond even my own imagination and I love it, because it’s like the next step of what I may imagine later on.
At first, I wasn’t a fan of all these murders, but now that I see it as a means to inflict fear on to the public, this is genius!
Back to this chapter. Wow, I love how Megan has control over everything. It did feel weird to see Cindy so helpless, but I don’t mind since I’m actually liking Megan a little bit now too.
Looks like the shrinking abilities are more complex than we thought. Megan definitely has figured out a way to maximize its effectiveness and neutralize anyone else with shrinking powers.
I love the interrogation scene where Megan uses Cindy to torture the tiny guys. Man, that was hot. Also, I found it funny that Cindy thought Megan wanted oral when she got tied up. Lol. Classic Cindy, always horny.
Now Thomas is approaching the scene. Part of me wonders if Megan kidnaps Thomas and keeps him hostage in her panties. Imagine Cindy tied up and forced to watch as Megan slowly picks up a tiny Thomas and lowers him down to her panties while Cindy can’t do anything.
Or actually, what if Megan dropped Thomas into Cindy’s panties instead. Maybe, Cindy gets knocked unconscious and Megan slides Thomas in there before Cindy wakes up and then Cindy wakes up feeling horny and finds Thomas down there.
Ok, I’m fantasizing way too much, but I love the twist in this chapter. The bad guy, is actually ….. on my side, I guess. Lol. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm so so so happy to hear that you've warmed up to the murders. I was unsure whether Satyr's motivation made sense, so I'm very glad you liked it. I would say this villain is a reflection of all of us lurking on this website lol
Yep, it's pretty strange to see our dominant protagonist in a powerless position. There is so much about the world and herself that she is naive to, including her powers
I love your scene concept of Megan kidnapping Thomas and forcing him in Cindy's panties. Especially because Cindy would wake up and...kind of like it. Maybe she would even keep him down there
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Battle of 78 Midland Avenue
Some big {pardon the pun} questions have to asked from this chapter.
Who is Alicia? Is she Megan's sister, and perhaps the kidnapped nurse? After all, the nurse told Desmond this was all her fault yet never explained why.
Why can't Cindy shrink people now that she is tied up? What happened to her powers?
Cindy shrunk men in their clothing, how could she not realize she could shrink material objects?
Is the Satyr / goat really a man, or perhaps actually a woman? If the Satyr is really a man, I agree with his "world of goddesses".
However his quick ending, being smushed to death in Cindy's amazing and all powerful cleavage; combined with spending so much time in Aphrodite's panty that guy had one heck of a final day on Earth.
Now the most confusing question, why is Thomas seeing Cindy as a Giantess? Are the gunmen surrounding her also giant? Which would mean Thomas is probably already shrunk and does not realize it.
A lot of questions, awaiting a lot of answers.
By the way, hope Cindy actually swallows Jack. Does Aphrodite have someone(s) in her right high heel, maybe just for balance or further encouragement for Cindy?
Author's Response:
These are some great questions! I'll try to answer them as best as I can, but I won't reveal any spoilers for the future:
Alicia is Cindy's sister, who is the kidnapped nurse. She is the same woman who was strapped to the table, who asked Desmond whether her boob was comfortable
Cindy is not able to shrink Megan because she has the same powers. The two cannot use their powers on each other. Cindy is also unable to shrink anyone else because Megan is using her powers to keep them at a normal size. Science has made Megan's powers more advanced
To answer why Cindy could shrink people's clothing and not objects, you need to understand the interesting relationship between Cindy and her powers. Cindy simply views her powers as a "tool" at her disposal, and does not put much time into contemplating its full potential. She shrinks people's clothes because it is convenient, but she has never thought to shrink random objects. It is also a lot harder to shrink an object alone, but Megan is able to consistently do so through practice
This becomes clearer in the next chapter, but at the end of the chapter Cindy has realized how much she had been slacking with her powers after seeing what Megan did with them. So she focuses on herself and grows into a giantess. In the last scene, Thomas and the gunmen are normal size, but Cindy is a giant
Now to respond to your other comments. I'm really happy with people's responses to Satyr's motivation. Interesting theory about him, stay tuned to find out. I think a person's last day being stuck in panties and crushed to death between boobs is both horrifying and glorious. I feel a lot of envy and pity for the man. I think it is safe to assume that Aphrodite always has a tiny with her somewhere, she is an evil and horny bastard haha