Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Memories of Cindy Mitchells

Ok, I saw the title of chapter 21 and that helped me a little bit.   I think I was so confused because the transitions between the past and the present day weren't very clear to me on the first reading of this chapter.   I guess if you are going to mix past with present, maybe you could try to delineate it a little more clearly.  Thanks!

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much for the feedback! Looking back, I can see how the chapter is a little confusing. I'm glad you figured it out