Date: March 12 2016 1:38 PM Title: Bargain
If you continue this story (which I really hope you do), it'd be awesome to have a flashback to some of the things he did with Jessica, since we only got to see an "easy" night for her. Either way, I really love this story from you as well!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well.
However, while I did have plans for where this story would go and have had some foreshadowing done here and there in it, I've mostly lost interest in this story, at least for the foreseeable future. While Leon is not a reflection of my thoughts on women at all, I don't want people to get the wrong idea about me with this story as well as my Feminia stories, despite saying in those that I meant no ill will towards feminism in and of itself.
Additionally, I'm currently not comfortable writing Leon, due to being a bit more sensitive about misogyny since starting this story. Yeah, he's just a character, but seeing this general increase in "Red Pill" and PUA/RoK ideology online in the last few years, I don't really want to contribute to it even if I personally disagree with Leon's character.
Date: March 25 2011 11:24 PM Title: Bargain
:) lol Great another stupid V.S.W. story what are you some kinda of .....lol :)
Just playing around; it an ok story. To be truthful I think there was too much feet stuff;but, this also coming from the guy whose belife is that you can't have too much vore. In other words to reach his own. Anyways I just wanted to say nice story; I am not much into M/f shrink but this one was ok; keep at this one.
Date: March 22 2011 3:26 PM Title: Bargain
I like your story and i think it sounds great. I hope that you continue on more things. I am also new to this so if you want to check out my first story then by all means. But i'm enjoying reading it.
Date: September 12 2009 11:15 AM Title: Bargain
It is very possible, Chozo. :) I read just about any male-involved story that I can find. I love the macro world at large, not at all limiting myself strictly to the giantess side of the interest.
Either way, apologies for the mistake. I shall in future, attempt to be a little more observant.
:-)
Date: September 12 2009 10:40 AM Title: Bargain
I would just like to interject for a minute to say that I recently posted a male giant story where the male in question was black. It is possible Canaan is confusing my story with the character here...
Now as for the recent chapter, I haven't actually read it yet so I will withold rating/review for the time being. I just wanted to point that out as a possible source of the confusion.
But yes, description is good. Do not spare details on the sights, smells, sounds, etc. These help to draw readers in and make a story more interesting and deep.
Date: September 12 2009 7:45 AM Title: Bargain
If I may, Solar Crimson, I have noticed a few things that could greatly improve your story were you to iclude them.
Foot description: not once do you describe what your main character's feet look like. Is he flat-footed (I ask because you did mention once that he is black)? Does he have arches in his feet instead? If so, are they high, mediocre, low? Are his feet callused, or are they smooth? Are they broad, narrow or some where in between? I think knowing these facts about his feet are important to a story like this. Not only would the descriptions add to the story's atmosphere, but your supporting characters are at his feet. So describing what they see would add a lot to your story's depth as well.
The same holds true for describing the rest of your character. I have noted a distinct lack of description of his genatalia. Does he have a huge penis? Or is part of this angst against women because he was rejected perhaps for having a small one?
Your story is really good, so this is by no means a critisism. I just think that you could greatly improve upon it by adding a little more descriptiveness.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the tips. I'm still new when it comes to M/f, and I'm still a bit bashful about the genitalia descriptions. In the future, I'm sure I'll get better at it.
Also, I think you may have been mistaken. Leon isn't Black; he's White. I'm not sure where you got that idea, though perhaps I should have said so in the story (I only tend to bring up the race of characters if they are non-White, since most people reading these stories already assume the characters to be White if they don't have an exotic/non-English name).
But thanks for the review. :)
Date: June 10 2009 3:51 PM Title: Bargain
Holy shit...
"Hate" review?!
Damn, dude, I enjoyed the hell out of this all-too-infrequent reversal in the "GTS" roles! It was nice to see a tiny woman get stepped on by a giant man for a change! :D
Excellent writing style you have, too. A very smooth and easy, and very entertaining read! Here's to hoping to seeing more from you, soon!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2009 10:01 PM Title: Bargain
Wow! This was quite a surprise. I thought I was reading the tags wrong at first. :)
Great, greats stuff. I'm excited for you to continue this. It's a bold story to write, and, seeing as I love M/f foot content, I'll be with you every step of the way.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, and glad that you enjoyed it! :)
That means a lot coming from you, because it was your stories on VSW (I lurk there from time to time), as well as that "Avon Lady" story, that opened me up a lot to M/f. :)