[Report This]Date: September 12 2009 11:40 AM Title: Nymphs
Okay, now having read this chapter I will say that I liked it a lot which means I will give it a high score, but it won't be a perfect score because I feel there is room for improvement in the detail of the descriptions. I also feel it was too heavily feet-oriented, and while feet isn't a bad thing by any means, it is way overdone in size stories, and it would be nice to see other related content like ass and vore and whatnot as well.
Don't get me wrong -- the chapter was great and I do like foot stuff, but I like some variety too. So some foot stuff is good, but you know...
I was also a tiny bit disappointed when Leon regrew Kayla. As a leader I was led to assume he was going to do something special with her, but then that was reversed which just feels like you were backpedaling. Not a huge gripe, though.
Author's Response:
Well, vore is a given, and Leon's whole "which kind of death is your favorite" banter kinda foreshadowed what I plan to do in the future. ;) As for the feet, I know that it was a bit much, especially for a M/f story, but that stems from the fact that I like the exact same stuff for M/f as I do in F/m, and foot-related M/f content is not all too common.
As for Kayla being regrown, I said on GiantessCity that both Kayla and Charlotte are main characters, so they're going to be around for a while. I COULD have done more with micro Kayla in Chapter 4, but the chapter was getting a bit too long already, so I had to cut it short and save it for another time.
But thanks for reading and reviewing. :)