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Reviewer: UnawareAuthor Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2022 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, I like the story so much and I love the fact that she's still unaware of him and now actually unknowingly using him for her pleasure. Keep it up! :D

One thing though, please take notice of the font and color of the text in your chapters. I'm not sure if you're aware of that, but the first chapter has white background under the text, so it's really hard to read. I suggest you fix that and make sure that in upcoming chapters this issue doesn't appear.

Waiting for next one eagerly! Cya!





Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review, got any suggestions for the next chapter? I want to hear what the readers think. Also, I worked on your suggestion with the text and font being hard to read, can you please check to see if it's still good? It may look different on your end than on my end.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2022 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reminds of the opening chapter in CHOOSE YOUR OWN ADVENTURE. Except, in this case, the requisite three options would most likely be...

"He is found by a) Charlotte

                        b) one of her jealous teammates or

                        c) the nymphomaniacal captain of the cheerleader squad."



Author's Response:

Thank you for the five stars, and those were some thoughts I have been planning, but I have another idea. I'm creating chapter 2 right now.

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