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Reviewer: elza3imza3im Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2023 10:35 PM Title: Part 1

I love it too much...thanks...i hope she shrink her husband too

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2022 3:24 AM Title: Part 1

Nice, rather slutty story (considering Jessica's actions so far as a MILF with her son's two friends).

Dropping one in her cleavage and the other down her panties is always a great fantasy.  Can't wait to read where things go from here.

You do have a lot of grammatical errors which make your story a bit confusing to read; but nothing to bad that prevents the easy flow of your story.

You don't go into many details, especially about the description of Jessica other than she is an older woman with large DD breasts, bleached blonde hair, and a killer ass.  That leaves a lot to the readers imagination, which is a nice touch.  I myself imagine Jessica as one step above trailer trash.

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments. I will be going into more detail and fewer quotes in my next parts. Expect part 2 to be way more graphic. How do you feel if the dad shows up in a later part?

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