I really liked Nolan getting lost in Jessica's asshole, then Wyatt being sent in to search for Nolan after helped give Jessica an orgasm and was covered in her spasm.

Not much into mother / son interactions (nor father / daughter for that matter); but at least Eli only reached up Jessica's asshole to grab Wyatt's leg to pull him and Nolan out. 

I'm surprised they didn't love being up Jessica's ass more than they did; but reality and fantasy are often far apart and two different experiences.

As to your earlier question (in your previous reply to my comments), about the father showing up, I can only recommend you write stories that you yourself enjoy, and your intended audience will find itself over time.

I can only tell you I do not care for male giant stories, nor male on male interactions.  There's nothing wrong with them as far as I am concerned.  They are simply not my cup of tea.  I prefer women, especially mature women such as Jessica.

If you really want the father involved, perhaps Jessica could shrink him too. 

Personally, I think Eli should go back in his jar, and leave Jessica with Nolan and Wyatt, and perhaps the father depending how his character proceeds.

Your grammar has greatly improved over your first chapter, nicely done.

Looking forward to Jessica's bath.