[Report This]Date: July 21 2023 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really liked the set up in this chapter. Contrary to what another comment said I'd love for Penelope to remain the adorable shy girl she is right now. I just feel that enough characters are cheerfully dominant with Mikey. She brings a healthy balance to the dynamic. And the fact that she can so easily dominate him, especially in spite of her efforts not to, makes her feel all the more powerful than if she was actively trying to act strong.
But you're the author, my guy. You write it how you want it. But if she stays as the shy, bashful, accidentally dominant gf I feel that would help Mikey come to love the treatment all around. Either way this is great stuff so I'm eager to see what, or who, cums next
[Report This]Date: July 17 2023 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
more please
[Report This]Date: July 15 2023 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
I would love to see the mother have a turn. Felt like she’s just letting everyone else have their fun while I’m just waiting for her turn with Mike.
She was always the most confident and controlling with Mike so it would be fun to see her have her way with him. Maybe after Penelope, the mother could keep Mike with her for the night or something.
I could imagine her wearing some tight panties and going to sleep with Mike trapped in them, and then she has some wild dreams that causes her member to grow, which causes Mike to be even more trapped. And who knows what else she does in her sleep. Haha!
Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Futa domination is the way to go. Penelope is very shy so I think she would benefit most from some one-on-one time with her new boyfriend. She could move things to a room upstairs but since things are already moving very quickly between the two of them maybe she should take him back to her house for the night? Have him meet her parents? Maybe introduce a brother or sister of her own back home? Regardless, it seems that she is also very sensitive. We should see how Mike's flip-flopping is affecting her mentally. She's trying to be gentle and that's a good and appreciated change of pace but his seeming rejection of her affection feels like it would bring out some strong, negative feelings that she might feel better expressing away from prying eyes.
Date: July 14 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Have him kiss the dick. Maybe have it so he when he ingested Penelope’s precum he starts getting really into it, like the precum is an aphrodisiac. To the point where he loses himself slobbering on her dick and maybe accidentally getting cock vored / going into her dick.
Date: July 14 2023 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
BTW if you hit a block maybe can try some play in a similar futa story: https://ackater.github.io/writing.com-archival/#/1805839-Shrunken-at-home-with-Shemale-Sisters/1321
Date: July 14 2023 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
great story ! really like futa domination. Wish to see mother cock vore Mike and inner description of urethra & balls