Well my suggestion is always the same-2 or 3 spinoff chapters which take place in the 1:200 city-with maybe a scene where the colleague who appears in the first chapter takes a look at it through a huge magnyfing glass. And then, who knows. Seems appropriate. What do you think about this tiny spinoff? 

I am thinking about some scenarios for the part 2 of this story, if it's going to happen-involving a 1:2000 scale city. Maybe in the last chapter, they are finally able to shrink at that size, and the city is exposed for anyone who wanna see it-girls from college, her former colleagues, all looking at the city through an endless magnyfing glass. This could be the perfect closure of the story, but more a spinoff than an entire story, to be honest. At the moment still can't understand where this is going, though. 

I REALLY love where this is going. LOVE the idea of a tinier micro level. I know you said in the past you don’t like drawing out the shrinking but you do such an amazing job at it. I see it’s instantaneous I hope we get some Justin interacting at different sizes on his way down to absolutely nano :P

I love this story! Any idea when the next chapter will come?

I just caught up with this story, and I wanted to say how much I've enjoyed it so far. Also, a heads up, this is going to be long (I like to overthink stuff).

I really like the pacing and casualness of the worldbuilding so far. I mean, we learn the basic details of the various tiny cities and the shrinking technology through a fun and flirty conversation between Justin and Natasha at the start, more about the company and Dr. Perkins through Jazmin's rudeness and her co-workers reaction to it early on, and, most recently, that there are classes that have to be taken in order to handle a resident that's below a certain size (or is that class needed to handle residents of all sizes?) through Brooke's flirty teasing.

These are all valuable plot points (at least, I'm assuming Dr. Perkins will become relevant later on), but they're spread throughout the story in a way that flows naturally with the conversations in which they're revealed and spread out in a way that doesn't overwhelm the reader with too much information too soon. I think the hardest part of worldbuilding is the urge to infodump everything at the start to get it out of the way, but you avoided that intimidating clunckiness masterfully.

The characters are all also really engaging and easy to invest in. Man, when Justin had that "all is lost" chapter, where he found out about his size difference with Brooke and realized he was trapped tiny back-to-back, I really felt for him. He's been a pretty likable main character so far, and the personality he's displayed, whether he's lightheartedly teasing Natasha about her height in chapter 1 or navigating being tinier than the other residents in the shrinking room, really gives him a voice, so to speak. It's easy for characters, especially main characters, to fall into generic troupes and dialog, but, again, you avoid that quite well.

The harem style love life Justin has embraced so far has worked especially well in this story, as it allows the reader to enjoy sex scenarios on different size scales a bit, taking advantage of the size variations offered by the cities. Also, all three of the women in Justin's life bring something different to the table.

Natasha has an infectious personality and fun loving attitude that really draws the reader to her from the start, and Ally seems a more laid back, down to earth person looking for a bit of fun. Looking through some of the other reviews, I can see why so many people want Justin to end up with one of them.

But, personally, I prefer the slow burn, and, if this last chapter is any indication, that long game is about to pay off with Brooke. Granted, a lot of the chemistry between them happens "off stage" early on, as we're told that they're vibing without seeing it like we do with the other two girls (I don't think this is a bad thing, as the story would have been bogged down with mundane conversation, but it did give the other two girls an "advantage" with the reader early on, I think).

But then, after the size difference is discovered, that tension makes the relationship more interesting, as does Brooke's struggle with how tiny Justin is. This makes it all the more rewarding when she decides that her feelings for him are strong enough to overcome that doubt, and the anticipation built through the interactions between them from that point on are golden, at least to me. I don't know, there's something about how Brooke can tease Justin with something that's his size by stuffing it in her tits are panties and look him in the eye as though they're the same size at the same time that I really enjoy. But it's that build, that slow burn between them that sets up those scenes and gives them a different, more intense feel.

That slow burn also comes in the form of her concerns regarding Justin's size. At first, she seems deterred and doubtful that anything can happen between them because of it, but that's built into excitement over the prospect of sex with him, which will make that likely coming sex scene between them all the more rewarding. Also, the concern she shows for Justin's safety from what could easily be dismissed as a minor inconvenience in the internet outages during Jazmin's restocking nights, shows that her newfound lust hasn't overtaken her nature as a caring girlfriend and that she's really invested in the relationship.

'm really looking forward to where things go in the next chapter, from a plot standpoint as well as a smut one, as I think we're nearing the time that Brooke finds out the truth about Justin's situation.

Finally, we have Claire and Jazmin as two regularly seen characters. I really like what you've done with Claire. There's a bit of airheadedness to her, but it doesn't define her, another trap you've managed to avoid. She's not only good-natured but brave, has good instincts and able to navigate most of Jazmin's shit as well. And honestly, I'm willing to bet that her moments of being airheaded in Micropolis probably don't happen as often in the other cities and that they would happen less frequently there if the residents had a way to communicate with her, as she really seems to care about the residents and would be quick to fix any issues (such as accidently trapping a group of them in the park with her feet or using a thimble to deliver a drink to someone too small to use it) if she only knew about it. Also, I'm eager to see what her next move is after Jazmin's threat.

And that threat really heightened my opinion of Jazmin as a villain. I thought she was a solid giantess story villain with some personality but kind of typical in the sense that she just seemed to view the residents as less than people because of their size. But after threatening to shrink and kidnap Claire, her best friend as far as we know to this point, the imply that she likes having her as a friend (as though they're still friends after that), It now seems clear to me that she just thinks of everyone as lesser than her and that the only real difference between the residents and regular sized people in her eyes is what she can get away with. This also made me reevaluate some of her earlier interactions with her co-workers in which I initially thought she was being crude because she just didn't care, but now I think this was intentional on her part in order to enjoy their shocked, angered, and embarrassed reactions, as well as the fact that they couldn't do anything about it. Maybe I'm overthinking things, but this added a bit more depth to the character for me.

Well, if you're still reading after all of that, I do have a bit of constructive criticism for you. I kind of feel like the post-rape interaction between Justin and Natasha could have been handled a bit better. Natasha being remorseful after drunkenly taking advantage of Justin was done pretty well, but I think Justin not even really addressing it was a bit of an issue. This didn't even have to be him confronting her about it; maybe he has an internal struggle in which his anger/shame/insecurity/whatever he's feeling is met with his need to comfort his close friend. Maybe seeing her cry had an effect on him, maybe his guilt over her being a resident at all overrides any negative feelings he has about the rape, or maybe there's another reason he's able to move past it.

My (admittedly long-winded) point is that Justin doesn't deal with it at all. Also, he doesn't feel inadequate when he's forced into being a sex toy by his former co-worker whom he used to tower over, yet he's dejected that he couldn't use a soap dispenser? I don't know, I just feel as though there needed to be something like that there.

But, to be fair, this story has a good bit of smut in it, and I understand that there are times in which that smut is going to skirt these issues but not deal with them for the sake of the reader enjoying said smut. I honestly wouldn't have even brought the point up, but the detail and character development throughout the story are so good that an omission like this is noticeable, and I thought maybe this feedback might help in the future if you do a similar scene in a different story.

But yeah, overall, this story is great, and I'm really enjoying it so far.

Of course, story com first, ‘safety’ and ‘cost’ and video can come latter. 

I most certainly will be eager to see what comes next!

Tell us this story is not already dead :O

Could also totally talk about any incidents and ‘incidents’ that happend because of the excitement like Natasha’s (possibly to a greater, smarter, or more prepared degree).

Thought it could also be good world-building for Natasha to get a corporate scolding, like what Alia was trying to be professional about, if shes still to insistent to tries to go to far, talking about genuine accidents or thing people tired to do that got serious. You know now safety regulations are made once someone gets injured or died, that sort of thing. 

So just real interesting stuff that could come. 

No problem at all that you're not planning as much with feet...the story is great anyway! But if you do want to do more with bate footplay, can consider things like climbing toes or climbing the soles of Natasha's feet up the wrinkles as her feet rest on their heels. Then there's always building crush under bare feet or picking cars or trees up with her toes. Another great scenario for the micro city is if there's a micro bay or port in the city and the residents try to escape from Natasha by ship she grabs the ship and plays with it like a bath toy. Hoping for LOTS of POV descriptions from the tiny perspective and size comparisons. Can't wait to see her mental shift from short girl to giantess,  and thanks so much for considering my foot recommendations!

A great start to this story!!  Very much looking forward to seeing where this goes!  Keep it up!!!