Date: February 14 2023 5:27 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Tell us this story is not already dead :O
Author's Response:
Sorry to worry you! I unfortunately had some things come up in my personal life that kept me away from writing. I hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Date: January 15 2023 8:04 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Love this story, reminds me of brobdingnagians business by vivetta venray, but there the tiniest were way smaller.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've never read that one. I'll have to check it out!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2023 8:06 PM Title: Shrinking Ahead of Schedule
Great transition chapter! Also interesting comment about them being able to shrink a city to 1:2000 scale...that means if Justin was in that city Natasha would look over 10,000 ft tall...imagine the fun a short girl would have in that city! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: January 13 2023 11:35 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Could also totally talk about any incidents and ‘incidents’ that happend because of the excitement like Natasha’s (possibly to a greater, smarter, or more prepared degree).
Thought it could also be good world-building for Natasha to get a corporate scolding, like what Alia was trying to be professional about, if shes still to insistent to tries to go to far, talking about genuine accidents or thing people tired to do that got serious. You know now safety regulations are made once someone gets injured or died, that sort of thing.
So just real interesting stuff that could come.
Author's Response:
Sadly, Natasha doesn't work for Micro Cities, inc... but there are some new characters we'll meet that I think will fit the bill!
(Also, don't worry, this isn't the last we see of Natasha!)
[Report This]Date: January 13 2023 9:14 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Good continuation.
And while I’m not so completely with foot play as bobbylaws1, I can see there being a policy related to what shows are worn, normal high heels or a supported platform to minimize the potential of accidental crushing. Thought Natasha might be told about this if she wore wedges, those are a very stable and walkable kind of heel with the most footprint, unlike stilettos and such.
And with theses MicroCities now getting so small, and possibly smaller in the works, making a city in a platform heel sounds like something Natasha or other enthusiasts would bring up, and that Justin might get involved in designing. Much to his chagrin.
Author's Response:
The current rumor around the company is that after all the kinks are worked out for Micropolis, they plan to make a 1:2000 scale city! No one has found a lower limit for this shrinking tech... yet.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2022 2:44 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
No problem at all that you're not planning as much with feet...the story is great anyway! But if you do want to do more with bate footplay, can consider things like climbing toes or climbing the soles of Natasha's feet up the wrinkles as her feet rest on their heels. Then there's always building crush under bare feet or picking cars or trees up with her toes. Another great scenario for the micro city is if there's a micro bay or port in the city and the residents try to escape from Natasha by ship she grabs the ship and plays with it like a bath toy. Hoping for LOTS of POV descriptions from the tiny perspective and size comparisons. Can't wait to see her mental shift from short girl to giantess, and thanks so much for considering my foot recommendations!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! I'll try to keep this in mind for the next foot scene I attempt.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 9:36 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Good start!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 4:23 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
A great start to this story!! Very much looking forward to seeing where this goes! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
I've written an outline for ~12-13 chapters. I hope you're along for the ride!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 4:03 PM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
One of the most promising story starts in a long time? I can't wait to see a 1000 foot Natasha! I love the short girl turned giantess scenario as it let's the short girl to really live out fantasies. Hoping for lots of bare footplay! Best those soles will look huge!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the huge compliment!
I also love the whole "short girl turned giantess" and try to include it in every story. :D
I'm honestly not a foot guy so I never know if my foot scenes are hitting the mark. I've got a handful planned throughout the story, so I hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 11:43 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
A promising start! Curious to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
I've written an outline for ~12-13 chapters. Plus maybe some one-shots in this universe... I hope you stick around!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 10:05 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
great start
Author's Response:
Thank you~
Date: December 30 2022 8:09 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Very nice concept, and I love the description. It’s just the right amount. I’m looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
That's good to hear! It's hard to balance detail versus letting the reader's imagination fill in the gaps!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 6:55 AM Title: Shrinking into a New Job
Yes please!
Author's Response:
Thank you~