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Reviewer: Lupe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2023 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 9 - There's No Place Like Home [Adam]

This was probably the best chapter yet with the teasing and eventual fate.

I’m wondering - would you ever do an alternate timeline where he does end up injected into Jordan’s butt? That seems like so much set up without it ever being explored.

Thanks your your continued writings!

Author's Response:

I think you're REALLY going to enjoy the Injected sequel then!


It starts posting to my Patreon this coming Tuesday and will eventually be posted here on GTSworld

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2023 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Homewrecker [Evette & Adam]

Sequel? Sequel?!?!?! You must live somewhere with 36 hours in a day, and I still don't know how you juggle so many stories without your head exploding...



Author's Response: The sequel will make the first story seem mild!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 31 2023 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Claire's Journal Entries

The page that ends with "hmm..." is repeated twice.

And by "repeated twice" I mean that I'm done catching up, so many details I didn't remember!!



Author's Response:

Ahh, doesn't matter how many times I double check!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2023 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - In a Syringe Chamber Far, Far Away [Adam]

I'm already five chapters late wrt my reading schedule, no need to make it more difficult! :)

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2023 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Along for the Ride [Tom]

Nice. That was a lot of fun. Is it bad that I hope that Tom ends up going so deep that he ends up in a different part of the body, and forever trapped inside Jeong-Suk?



Author's Response:

Nope!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 08 2023 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - A New Friend [Jeong-Suk]

Very, VERY nice chapter. 

One can only assume tiny Tom was in the pink jewel of Claire's necklace, and is now the tickle in Jeong-Suk's left breast.  Hmmm, shouldn't Claire be working on a matching partner for Jeong-Suk's right breast?  What about Claire's own breasts, or is she using Jeong-Suk as the proverbial guinea pig?

Are there any other uses for shrunken males (or women) in Claire's mind?  One guy in another female's left breast seems rather limited in scope, especially considering the detailed notes Claire constantly logs.

Looking forward to more of your great story.

If I may ask a personal question, what does the "drkW" stand for in your name?  The "D W" I use stands for "Dark Writer", my old Writing.com pseudonym.  Somehow I lost my log in information to that site so no longer can access it; and when I used it here originally I mysteriously got locked out of that account name.  Just curious.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the feedback; I am enjoying your curiosity!


The drkW stands for Dr. Katie Walker from the R&R series. She's what kicked all of this off so I figured I owed her the reference.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Hey Fishy! [Claire]

I read this first chapter somewhere before.  Liked it then and like it now.  Can't wait to read more.

Claire sounds like a hot and sexy psychotic.  Not sure if that's good or bad; but leaning towards good.

Is there really a Jeong-Suk?  I Googled her and only found a guy by that name.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Claire is going to get much more extreme.


https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q6312550

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2023 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hey Fishy! [Claire]

I didn't remember the sock... btw, in case you're interested, https://lobste.rs/s/gkqvsi/using_gpt_3_help_with_proofreading :)



Author's Response:

Definitely want to incorporate chatGPT into writing.  Too bad it needs a phone number..

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hey Fishy! [Claire]

I am excited to see where this will go

Author's Response:

Its gonna get crazy!

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