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Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2023 12:38 PM Title: Enter Lars

The beginning of the story was very good. It was drawing me in a lot. The pacing was good. The last chapter came out of no where. The teeth and lasers came out of the blue. It made it look like he had been prepared to be shrunk in the last chapter when it looked like he didn't for the rest of them. Very good story though. Liked Carrie seeking revenge with the shrink ray and trying to give him what he wanted without it being exactly how he planned

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