[Report This]Date: May 02 2023 5:21 AM Title: A Business Venture, and the Workout Club (6/11 Edit)
Wow, I can’t believe I didn’t see this story until now! I love these kinds of school settings! Tiny guy surrounded by all these women, I love it.
My favorite so far might be either Emma or Vanessa and that’s simply because I think it’s fun reading about someone that is horny for David.
I’m also curious if there will be any giantess teachers having their way with David since it was mentioned in the beginning that faculty might use him as well.
So far there is just Miss Bosak and Mrs. Miller. Mrs. Miller seems more interesting of the 2 since she already seems to have a bias of David misbehaving. Or maybe there will be a third teacher that is horny and wants to give David private detention or something. Idk, if you even want to include a teacher since you haven’t had much teacher action yet, but if you do, I’m very interested if you want to discuss it and such.
I also like the rules listed by Miss Bosak in the beginning. There’s some tension when others cross those rules and also I noticed that those rules seem to only apply to students so that might give teachers some advantages.
I also like how most girls want to be in Jenna’s position since she has free access to David all the time basically. That desire from everyone else makes it entertaining as they fight for him.
So far, I’m enjoying this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! The rules stated in the first chapter are the original rules for the Writing.com interactive story "TIny guy in a female college," I've been considering taking those beginning rules out since that and like 3 names and the setting is all that was given at the beginning of the interactive, those rules are mainly for those who add on the the story there. That's why there was so little detail in the highschool chapter as involving underage girls would violate the rules of the story. As for the teachers, I've been thinking about adding something with them, but I might not. If I do, it will likely be unaware.
Emma seems to be a bit of a favorite, as her chapter has more views than any other chapter (Excluding the first one). Vanessa is a bit harder to write as there are many things I want her to do as a character, but those chapters are coming later.
It'd be cool to have someone to talk with about this story, if you use the Giantess World discord, my name is AtleastDecent.
Thank you for your review
P.S. It's just Ms. Miller, she's not married.