[Report This]Date: June 30 2023 4:15 AM Title: The Good Ending
I thought Carmen was blonde? Also there's a typo near the beginning when Molly starts texting Tyler and you call her Carmen.
Also, really loved this chapter. I thought you abandoned it for a sec lol
I should've known the good ending was coming first since you love bad endings lol
Author's Response:
Yes, Carmen is a blonde. That's been corrected, along with the Carmen/Molly name swap. Been jumping back and forth between stories so much I started to get my characters confused! I really appreciate you letting me know of these mistakes. Plenty of things don't get caught by a text editor when they aren't outright spelling errors, so it's a huge help to point them out.
And it may take a while, as I have two commissions that are turning into pretty long, multi-part stories, but I'll make sure I finish posting this story before I start writing any of my other story plans. I need the practice creating satisfying endings. Thanks for the continued support!!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2023 3:46 AM Title: The Good Ending
I am latching onto this happy ending with a vengeance!!
Aiden deserves this after everything Molly put him through.
(I know I need to go back and retroactively review the previous chapters, I have been reading along but haven't had the chance to review them)
I know there is going to be a bad ending, I know I am going to read, said bad ending.
But I am latching hold of this good ending with fierce dependance XD
Carmen rescuing him was so cathartic. (but I hope there's more catharsis to come)
And Molly's nervousness and realizing that "No"she can't put it over Carmen or people her own size, and there's going to be serious reprecussions coming her way was such sweet paragraphs to read, Carmen grabbing her and asserting herself was also a great scene.
This is reminding me of the "Just desserts" chapter of 'Losing Control' (which if you recall, I reviewed with such elation when Alexis shrunk after all the crap she'd pulled)
I am excited for the rest of the good (cough true cough) ending XD
Author's Response:
It's easy for me to forget there are people out there reading my stories who aren't complete sadists. I took a look back through some of my other stories and saw how everyone was always so cruel. I think it's just easier for me to come up with a fun, fetishy scenario when the giantess is a big, uncaring bully. However, there is undoubtedly a great feeling that comes from justice being served. I hope this one lives up to the expectation! I think it will, though. I'll say we can expect Aiden to get a bit of compensation for his time served.
Thanks so much for reading!!