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Reviewer: ItsKeine Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2023 5:03 AM Title: Lets get Growing~

This was pretty good! Not too complicated or bogged down with unnecessary things. Professor was cute. I appreciate the narrator was left as unidentified as possible (so in my brain she was a woman and this story is gay as hell~)

About the only thing I can suggest is that you got about 4/5ths the way toward being an x-rated story, so you might as well have gone all the way and made it fully lewd. As aroused as she was getting. Professor might as well just have pleasured herself at the end. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I thoroughly enjoy the perspective that you chose~~


Indeed making the audio "safe" for YouTube means that some of my stories walk right up to the edge like this one. Fear not, I have plenty of lewd stories I wish to tell. "Size Thief Sex" is absolute *fire* and will only be able to be posted here, not on my YouTube channel. So there are a few stories that will keep being added to my YouTube channel, and others that will find their way here. Who knows, with some more encouragement maybe I would write a lewd ending to this^^ 

Reviewer: Killer_Huge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2023 4:36 PM Title: Lets get Growing~

Excellent short story, much to enjoy here. Don't listen to the recommendation to externalize the dialogue, what a terrible shame that would be. Your flow is great.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the kind words ^^ I'm happy you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2023 7:20 AM Title: Lets get Growing~

This was a great read! Hiding in a quarry to test growth is a good idea and you executed it well. Hope to see even bigger sizes next time!

My one critique would be the POV character's dialogue. Rather than having his words described in the narration it'd be better if you wrote out the dialogue.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, I am full of ideas and some of them are definitely about bigger sizes~ 


I went back and forth on how to do the dialogue, or rather the lack of it. I decided to let the reader put themselves entirely in those character's shoes... Which means that the point of view is not necessarily a man ^^ 

Reviewer: writer27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2023 2:55 AM Title: Lets get Growing~

This is a fantastic story. Thank you.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you enjoyed it ^^ 

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2023 11:45 PM Title: Lets get Growing~

This story was great! Thank you for writing and posting it. The first half was tame enough (maybe even too tame ;) ) for me to not see the twist coming, and for that bravo. I really thought: ok, she shrinks back and thats it, maybe they drive home and we "see" her room, which reveals her as a secret psychopath planning for her "Big day" and we see her inner thoughts about the situations she was in today, and what she really would have liked to do with her assistant. You now, a really dark twist to the tame first part. 

But the escalation and the build up were really nice and nicely described! I especially loved the realization. The only thing I wished was different, and this is a personal preference, is her final high after the sentence "I sent her into the stratosphere". I know math said around 550 feet, but honestly, FUCK MATH, math always ruins our fun and dreams. That prof deserved to be miles tall and crush a bit of the landscape in the process!


So, to make it short (and sorry for my bad english): 9 outta 10, would fap again!

Thanks and have a wonderful day.



Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind review! The professor is wonderful and you are right she did deserve to be even bigger ^^ I enjoy writing "tame" stories quite a bit for the aspect of storytelling... But certainly enjoy lewd ones even more. Stay tuned for those, I think you will enjoy them quite a bit. My YouTube channel has a few of those examples at the moment, but they're not very good right now. 

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