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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A Cute Pink Thong

"The fact that Lacey told Emily" - does she think of herself in the 3rd person?


I'm not sure why I thought this was going to be unaware, but her knowing about Dakota's situation ended up being a nice surprise for me!



Author's Response:

I bounced between writing that scene as narration and Emily's thoughts/speech several times. Looks like I missed one; thank you!


I'm glad you appreciate the surprise. There's another pretty big one coming next chapter ;-)

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