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Reviewer: Aldo121319 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2023 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Covering Her Tracks

This story has been absolutely excellent so far, and this most recent chapter far exceeded what came before it. 
Emily’s bratty, selfish decision in this chapter was an excellent twist, and I’m genuinely very excited to see where this goes next!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2023 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Covering Her Tracks

Wow, you weren't joking when you said there was going to be a big surprise!


There's a fair chance the technicians will be able to say that the reason they can't get him out is that he just isn't there, and Emily will basically have to act natural 24/7 in front of her sister, but much more important than that, this story is just awesome.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  It is certainly an interesting twist for sure

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