You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: TurnAbout Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2023 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loving this one so far!

Just caught a small mistake, the paragraph where Maddie falls onto Jack, there's a sentence or two where Maddie and Emma change to Molly and Ella





Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Staring at a screen and jumping back and forth for hours on end makes it easy to just gloss over names in general. I appreciate the review and catching the typo!


Thanks for reading!!

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.