[Report This]Date: July 21 2023 4:45 AM Title: A family that shrinks together...
Amazing story!! I would love to see an epilogue that shows the torture Miley is going through, if you ever make one.
Sorry I realized I gave the wrong star rating and reposted my review LOL
[Report This]Date: July 12 2023 4:24 PM Title: A family that shrinks together...
Excellent story! Works nicely as a self-contained one shot, but has great potential for a sequel as well.
Would love to find out what happens to Miley under her new owner. Maybe she manages to escape and reunite with her best friend Bethany; knowing your writing, it probably won’t be a happy reunion… But us gentle fans can hope!
Author's Response:
Lol, you would be absolutely correct regarding the outcome for Miley.
I'm debating writing an epilogue not 100% sure yet.
Date: July 11 2023 11:23 PM Title: A family that shrinks together...
I loved this so much!! Really wish we could’ve seen more of the family’s initial training but I know this is probably meant to just be a one off so I don’t mind. I really enjoyed it nonetheless!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Unfortunately just a one off but I may do an addendum with an epilogue. Probably one of the funnest quick hits I've written in a while.