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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

really interesting.  can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: aHomester Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2023 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interested to see where this goes. Using first person can help convey the scene/setting for the MC more effectively than one can do in the third person

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