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Reviewer: Deliciousdinner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

This turned me on so much. Please eat me Amanda!! More than anything I wish to be your dinner. I hope you consider me an addition to your menu.

Author's Response:

It would me pleasure to put your screaming aquirming lush fleshy body between my open lips,ooh i am salivating at the thought of feeling your struggles as you try in vain to escape  the soft warm entrance to my hungry tummy oooh i can feel your body entring my throat, a nice warm peice of living flesh and bone sliding into my body.hheeee i love it.

 

Come for dinner hehe i will put you on my menu hehe.

Amanda xx  

Reviewer: Plasmids22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a very erotic and sexy story, I loved it!! I would have given anything to have been Oliver and to be swallowed by you Amanda that would be a dream come true!

I loved the willingness of the character Oliver and how he wanted his fantasy to be granted. I kept placing myself in the story with that same willingness and doing almost exactly what he was doing (only difference, I would have let you eat me when you asked!). This story was very well written and I really enjoyed it!

Thank you for writing it Amanda! I hope one day I'll have the pleasure of being placed in your beautiful mouth, sliding down your long throat, and landing in your sexy belly!

Author's Response:

Me toooooo hehe

 

Amanda xxxx

Reviewer: AGrader Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2009 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

SaniPan leaves your lavatory sparkling clean after those very personalized little snacks.
I think I'd better start going to the gym.

Author's Response:

Could be dangerous  i would be very carefull if i were you.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2009 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Precisely, my point, m'dear. Leotards leave _much_ more to the imagination than the current exercise-wear for women!

;-)

Author's Response:

Haha i see,you are a naughty man Carycomic i like my meals to be cheeky.dignity should always be used sexily to tease the male imagination don't you agree.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Tiny Brandon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2009 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

hi amanda as usual you know i loved the story its amazing how you keep on doing it

Author's Response:

in the middle of another where u been?thank you kind Tinybrandon.

Amanda.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2009 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good new angle, in that Oliver never swears or insults or makes any violent objection.

Author's Response:

Yes i may have played a part in that also,i must thank oliver for this,he has since we started communicating been very polite and mindfull of the way in which he puts his views across.He always treats me with respect not using coarce language to get his feelings recognised,as i explained in the opening txt this is Olivers work i only took the sexual angle up a few degrees because he didn't feel he should.I'm so glad you liked his little yarn i am writing one for him so watch this space.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2009 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad! Although, I've always felt women who exercise look sexier in black leotards with matching tights.

Ah, well! One can't have everything. Can one? ;-)

Author's Response:

Mmm  leotards i wouldn't wear them for obvious reasons,although i do own  one.... i prefer leggings myself we have to be wise though i would not want to show every male certain parts of my anatomy.

Thank you for your comments i shall inform Oliver, after all most of this txt came from his library of words i have only added a little bit of my sexy thoughts to it.

Amanda.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2009 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Amanda please eat me!!!! Loved the story! I would so love to slide down your gullet  and meet my end in your lovely, man-eating belly!!

Author's Response:

I would in an instant Tinyslave i am hungry for your flesh,thank you for your kindness i shall add your name to my menu.

Amanda.

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