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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 11:17 PM Title: Humble beginnings pt 1

Very in depth execution of a premise that can be complex to write about. I’m loving the story so far! 



Author's Response:

That's awesome to hear! I'm really glad you like it. Doing the worldbuilding has been (and continues to be) such a blast for me.

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2023 9:45 PM Title: Humble beginnings pt 1

Good to see you back! I'm hoping that our pair will grow to enjoy one another's company over the course of some adventures, but we'll see what happens. Good start overall!

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2023 2:42 PM Title: Humble beginnings pt 1

You have my attention! Keep up the good writing. 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Second chapter should be out soon.

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